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Jarjar Mohammed Lucas

Episode III, Director's Cut

3 total reviews 
Comment from giraffmang
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi there,

I laughed my nuts off at this. So did my wife. So I'm giving it six stars and voting for it. It's so nice to actually be entertained on this site. it's becoming a rare occurrence indeed.

Best of luck
G

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
    Hey thank you G for this killer review -- I really appreciate it. This was a lot of fun to write, and possibly the most ridiculous thing I have written so far. There are only so many words allowed in the contest descriptions so the things that are banned have to rotate. In the latest family contest, four out of six entries were satire.

Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent
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Excellent story my friend! Such an awesome idea from Star Wars, I loved it;-)
Thank you so much for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
    Hey thanks very much Melodie. This was probably my favorite out of the four I wrote (so far). I seem to have made a series, or something. You probably saw the links in the author notes. This one made it late to the voting booth, so people are seeing it after its sequel, oddly, but it looks like you saw them in order : )
reply by Melodie Michelle on 28-Jan-2022
    Lol, I don't know but I adored this piece! Blessings ...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
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Again, thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I will never view Star Wars the same again. NOPE NEVER. LOL Good luck.

He sent a suicide bomber to the set to take our JarJar. (take OUT JarJar)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much. Good catch. I suppose Darth Vader saying "take our JarJar" is within the realm of possibility, if they became affectionate over the course of time, but it seemed somewhat less obvious and yes it was a typo. I wrote this in an hour and I am now speeding into work. Writing enough reviews to be able to enter this contest took up all my writing time, as usual, lol. Really looking forward to reading some of your work after I get done with moving this week!
reply by barbara.wilkey on 25-Jan-2022
    Since my writing is traditional old lady romance, I'm afraid you'll be disappointed, but I hope you do pay me a visit. I would like that.