Zeb's Mighty Fine Bridge
Sometimes it is hard to not draw wrong conclusions.16 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Building bridges and people were watching and complaining. We are building spiritual bridges and people complaining. Amazingly interesting dialogue. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Building bridges and people were watching and complaining. We are building spiritual bridges and people complaining. Amazingly interesting dialogue. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating.
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The pleasure is mine, Sir
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You have done a remarkable job on this dialogue-only contest.
You have interesting characters, keep the dialogue moving and engaging.
There is also a lesson here about gossiping and interfering in another's business.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
mary
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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You have done a remarkable job on this dialogue-only contest.
You have interesting characters, keep the dialogue moving and engaging.
There is also a lesson here about gossiping and interfering in another's business.
Thank you for the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
mary
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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"Thank you for your gracious comments and generous rating." he said (totally missing the dialog only guideline!)
Comment from LisaMay
Cute story about how people fail to get their facts straight before making judgments on others, and how folks love to gossip behind people's backs, and how apparently eccentric behaviour is seen as being not right in the head. Zeb's head and heart are in the right place all along.
Your dialogue runs smoothly as the story progresses. Very well handled.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Cute story about how people fail to get their facts straight before making judgments on others, and how folks love to gossip behind people's backs, and how apparently eccentric behaviour is seen as being not right in the head. Zeb's head and heart are in the right place all along.
Your dialogue runs smoothly as the story progresses. Very well handled.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. Zeb thanks you, too!
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Zeb sounds a really decent guy.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really neat and well written contest entry for the dialogue only writing contest. You used very good descriptive words. It was really neat reading this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This is a really neat and well written contest entry for the dialogue only writing contest. You used very good descriptive words. It was really neat reading this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and very generous rating. I wasn't sure the storyline would be followed with just dialog. As always, you are an encouragement.
Comment from Pantygynt
It is difficult to write a story entirely in dialogue as it can be a problem getting the setting across to the reader. You have managed to overcome that problem in this short piece. Well donew.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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It is difficult to write a story entirely in dialogue as it can be a problem getting the setting across to the reader. You have managed to overcome that problem in this short piece. Well donew.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a great story. It keeps you in the dark until quite near the end. It is probably a good lesson for people who are always sticking their noses into other people's business.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This is a great story. It keeps you in the dark until quite near the end. It is probably a good lesson for people who are always sticking their noses into other people's business.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
