Blueberry Fields
5-7-5 poem for the contest10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi June,
I bet this field smells as good as it looks. I once picked fresh blueberries. They are so good right off the vine.
Congrats for placing second in the contests.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Hi June,
I bet this field smells as good as it looks. I once picked fresh blueberries. They are so good right off the vine.
Congrats for placing second in the contests.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the positive thoughts!
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My pleasure, June.
Joan
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
One only dreams of those blueberry pies in late summer or fall (I like blueberry jam or preserves too!). You chose a wonderful illustration to pair with your verse and also selected a nice color scheme.
The aroma of a hot blueberry pie (maybe with a scoop of ice cream) makes my taste buds tingle (-;
Best wishes in the voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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June,
One only dreams of those blueberry pies in late summer or fall (I like blueberry jam or preserves too!). You chose a wonderful illustration to pair with your verse and also selected a nice color scheme.
The aroma of a hot blueberry pie (maybe with a scoop of ice cream) makes my taste buds tingle (-;
Best wishes in the voting.
Mark
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to have touched most of our senses - sight, taste, smell. I agree that ice cream on a slice of warm blueberry pie would be perfection on a cool autumm day...
Comment from Sugarray77
Your verse is very well written with a theme that touches the heart of this reader. I love nature and the plethora of gems we find there. This lovely blueberry patch is one of them... Well done, June... great verse.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Your verse is very well written with a theme that touches the heart of this reader. I love nature and the plethora of gems we find there. This lovely blueberry patch is one of them... Well done, June... great verse.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful poem about blueberries fields. We mostly only have raspberries in the Midwest. But I have harvest blueberries in the New York state before. I like the last line.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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What a beautiful poem about blueberries fields. We mostly only have raspberries in the Midwest. But I have harvest blueberries in the New York state before. I like the last line.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The last of nature's aromas before the seasons change, I enjoyed this farewell gift as it will never a long time before summer offers all its fine pleasures again, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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The last of nature's aromas before the seasons change, I enjoyed this farewell gift as it will never a long time before summer offers all its fine pleasures again, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Sally Law
Blueberries are my husband's favorite. Here in Florida we have them locally grown and go picking. It comes in a few months for us. Beautifully penned and illustrated in field of blue.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Blueberries are my husband's favorite. Here in Florida we have them locally grown and go picking. It comes in a few months for us. Beautifully penned and illustrated in field of blue.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Debra White
Hello June :)
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem (and I enjoy blueberries too!)
I like the idea of the sweet aroma of the blueberry fields being a 'gift' from one season to another. Lovely!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Hello June :)
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem (and I enjoy blueberries too!)
I like the idea of the sweet aroma of the blueberry fields being a 'gift' from one season to another. Lovely!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I enjoyed this, June. It's strange, but I never tasted a blueberry until I was almost thirty. What a waste of years! In the south, it was all about blackberries.
I love to look at that photo. I have never seen a field of blueberries--never thought about what it might look like. My daughter has a few bushes in her front yard, but nothing like that photo. That is extraordinary.
Glad that I read this one.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed this, June. It's strange, but I never tasted a blueberry until I was almost thirty. What a waste of years! In the south, it was all about blackberries.
I love to look at that photo. I have never seen a field of blueberries--never thought about what it might look like. My daughter has a few bushes in her front yard, but nothing like that photo. That is extraordinary.
Glad that I read this one.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Loved this piece! This brought so many great feelings of warmth. I can smell the fragrances in the air. I wish you much success with the contest. It was a pleasure to read; triggered all my senses.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Loved this piece! This brought so many great feelings of warmth. I can smell the fragrances in the air. I wish you much success with the contest. It was a pleasure to read; triggered all my senses.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork, June.
-Thanks for the note. Fresh blueberries
do make great pies and more!
-You have written a good poem
with effective nature imagery
describing the blueberry fields
and the enticing scents from the berries.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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-Lovely artwork, June.
-Thanks for the note. Fresh blueberries
do make great pies and more!
-You have written a good poem
with effective nature imagery
describing the blueberry fields
and the enticing scents from the berries.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This poem seems to appeal to a lot of people! They must be envisioning warm blueberry with a scoop of vanilla ice cream on a cold winter's night...Glad you enjoyed the read.
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That does sound delicious. You are very welcome for the review.
