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Weaving Around My Cat

Miss bossy-britches dominates my life. (100 words)

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Comment from Lisa Tepp
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All I can say is ME TOO! I have three cats and work from home, so needless to say, they get in the way. During Zoom meetings, they like to climb up on my shoulder, much to the entertainment of the other attendees. They definitely keep life interesting. On yes, they trip me up on my way to the fridge too! Great story!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2022

Comment from sherrygreywolf
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Such a cute contest entry! My day is much the same though my pets are considerably larger being about 150 pounds each. Contest is already over so I didn't get a chance to vote but I loved reading this.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet, you have 7 votes now!

Yes cats tend to so call get in the way , especially when it's good time.

They eat before me and with me.

And he's my life revolves around my cats.. their needs are catered first.

Dogs will wait but cats were put on this planet to be served by us.

I really enjoyed your poem !

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much for liking my poem enough to vote for it. if I win it will be because of your vote!
    Cats definitely know they are the boss of us.
reply by tempeste on 27-Jan-2022
    Glad you won .. sorry for all the typos

    When it s FOOD time ?not good time.

    And YES my life revolves ..and not ??. and he?s my life

    I usually check after I post but it slipped my mind this time .

    Take care!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the A Typical Day writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Good word count.

Your cat theme made me smile. I thought about my cat.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-words-or-less story, Weaving Around My Cat, shows the readers the dedicated writer and cat lover negotiating the "obstacle" which both provides a skill course and gives inspiration.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading about your day, it sounded really enjoyable... You have food and entertainment! What more could anyone need?!
You describe my favourite kind of triangle (food, pet, computer) and I love the humour in your write.
I know it's a blind contest, but think I may have an idea who you are, I could be wrong though...!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
    I think you are right about who you think has written this.
    Thanks for reviewing!
reply by Debra White on 27-Jan-2022
    I was right!
    Congratulations on your win!
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Here Kitty Kitty. LOL Cats can be very sneaky because their paws are so padded. You can't help but fall over some of them. They don't think they're doing anything wrong. It's in their nature. Stay safe and watch out for the cat!

Patty

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
    Thanks for your review Patty!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Your vocabulary and description are particularly fine in this short, short Typical Day contest entry. The elastic cat is a very amusing image to end on.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2022

Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written short story you have penned for the writing prompt. You seem to have the same problem that I do. Our cats like to walk in front of us and they don't worry about the fact that we could fall on them. lol Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
    It feels like cats do it on purpose just to be annoying! Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Love it! My imagination has run wild. Your typical day has been made into a fun one, so long as you keep that attitude (and don't step on the cat!). It's very well written, very engaging. Best wishes for your clever entry!
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2022