Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of your work reminisces a semblance of the popular Christian song: "Count Your Blessings Name Them One By One..."

The work highlights several occurrences akin to the human and natural environment that exemplify the dynamics of the wordings of this song.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of similes, oxymorons, alliterations, and rhymes.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

Thanks Lloyd.
When the thoughts were coming through my mind I started to realize it beauty comes in many different forms in many different ways for many different reasons.
And I figure I would end up with a powerful message.
Thanks for your time, review, and comments.
Doctor Ricky

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 25-Jan-2022

Remain Blessed.

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 25-Jan-2022

Remain Blessed.

Comment from Louise Muller

Excellent

Congratulations on a very effective piece of writing, Ricky. I loved the clear images you created and the incredible way you described different life phases. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing your art with the rest of us.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

Well when I came up with the idea I thought strongly on the subject.
I've written partially on it before in many different poems.
So some of it was already in my mind and some of it I created.
And thanks for sharing your time and coming on my site Louise.
Doctor Ricky 1024