God Graced an Actor Family Alive
God Graced a Film Actor Family Alive39 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Either you've been on this site for like a hundred years, not only is your writing All Time Best. But you are a All Time Best. And this is proof. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. For there is always something refreshing and new on deck. Stay Connected
Either you've been on this site for like a hundred years, not only is your writing All Time Best. But you are a All Time Best. And this is proof. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. For there is always something refreshing and new on deck. Stay Connected
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a very poignant write that fulfills perfectly the contest requirement of 3 sentences to a total of twenty seven words, on the subject of spiritual fiction. You have chosen a good illustration to accompany your story.
This is a very poignant write that fulfills perfectly the contest requirement of 3 sentences to a total of twenty seven words, on the subject of spiritual fiction. You have chosen a good illustration to accompany your story.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
Comment from papa55mike
Who in the world came up with this contest? But you did nail the prompt. What a wonderfully written story and a strong entry.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Who in the world came up with this contest? But you did nail the prompt. What a wonderfully written story and a strong entry.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
It is a contradiction, sad but happy, dead but alive. I just now got the three took nine. You did a good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
It is a contradiction, sad but happy, dead but alive. I just now got the three took nine. You did a good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
I do not understand. It seems to clearly say in your story that the actor and family died - but in your notes you say they were alive and walked home. So confused.
Thanks!
Dear Mystery Author,
I do not understand. It seems to clearly say in your story that the actor and family died - but in your notes you say they were alive and walked home. So confused.
Thanks!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from Jake Short
You achieved the prompt, so well done there. I like the analogy of walking home to be with God. I am curious what the full day delay was from them passing [yesterday] to them walking home today. That doesn't take away from the fiction at all, but it does leave it kind of open ended for me.
You achieved the prompt, so well done there. I like the analogy of walking home to be with God. I am curious what the full day delay was from them passing [yesterday] to them walking home today. That doesn't take away from the fiction at all, but it does leave it kind of open ended for me.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I will admit, I had to read this three times before I got the meaning of the last line. Then I saw that this a spiritual contest. The walked home meaning they went to Heaven. Okay, I think this meets the contest requirements, but if it is difficult to grasp, then something is missing or wrong. I don't blame you. These micro story contests don't allow for all the needed elements of a story.
Hmm, I will admit, I had to read this three times before I got the meaning of the last line. Then I saw that this a spiritual contest. The walked home meaning they went to Heaven. Okay, I think this meets the contest requirements, but if it is difficult to grasp, then something is missing or wrong. I don't blame you. These micro story contests don't allow for all the needed elements of a story.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from forestport12
I liked to tell people I tested positive for Jesus. I'm trying to grasp and understand it exactly. There's a dynamic here of covid shots and then death and maybe a statement of trusting God. I'm not too bright with it. But by the Grace of God. Truth.
I liked to tell people I tested positive for Jesus. I'm trying to grasp and understand it exactly. There's a dynamic here of covid shots and then death and maybe a statement of trusting God. I'm not too bright with it. But by the Grace of God. Truth.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from pome lover
That is the saddest thing.
I believe in God and His grace, and I feel sure He welcomed that family with love, but the vaccines have caused many deaths. And they each had three? The media doesn't report them.
Very sad.
That is the saddest thing.
I believe in God and His grace, and I feel sure He welcomed that family with love, but the vaccines have caused many deaths. And they each had three? The media doesn't report them.
Very sad.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very lovely story about a very sad occurrence that is so common these days. You have said a lot in a very few sentences. And your spirituality adds the hope of heaven for them.
Very lovely story about a very sad occurrence that is so common these days. You have said a lot in a very few sentences. And your spirituality adds the hope of heaven for them.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022