Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

Congratulations for a well written acrostic poem signifying that "Everyone Care." And thanks for sharing it with us.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes, alliteration, as well as its strict compliance with the acrostic rhyming writing prompt.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

Thank you!

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 23-Jan-2022

Remain Blessed

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I like your last line, Mr/Ms anonymous. You could have chosen "cheerfulness", (I'm sure that was your first choice) but you opted for cheerable, which put the focus on what only the individual can change: him/herself. It shows how important one word is in a poem. It's hard enough conforming with the restrictions of the Acrostic ... but you took the additional step of conforming to a deeper need ... which was thematic. Good job !

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Gee

Excellent

Very nice Acrostic poem for your competition.
I don't know the style.
But I think you did very well.
Thank you for sharing with us.
It is appreciated.
Gee

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

Thank you!