Vanished
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17 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Okay, I must have read the wrong chapter first. This one fills in the missing pieces for me. Now I understand what Annie was trying to tell everyone when she returned. I love this story. The dialogue makes it so easy to follow and paints a clear picture of the flow of events.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Okay, I must have read the wrong chapter first. This one fills in the missing pieces for me. Now I understand what Annie was trying to tell everyone when she returned. I love this story. The dialogue makes it so easy to follow and paints a clear picture of the flow of events.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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See I told you my craziness rubs off on people. LOL You can't read a book backwards...it doesn't come out right. Just kidding. Thanks for all your support.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
This is as great continuation to the story. Carol, you really seem to.have found your writing again, and when it's at its best. I loved this chapter and can't wait to reading on. Ull:)))
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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This is as great continuation to the story. Carol, you really seem to.have found your writing again, and when it's at its best. I loved this chapter and can't wait to reading on. Ull:)))
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Ulla... I am struggling, but I seem to be better when I can write. I appreciate all your support and kindness. My apologies for being so far behind.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Well, at least now we understand a little more about this woman in white. We know she's NOT a ghost - just someone on the outskirts of things - watching and hoping to help. I like this!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Carol,
Well, at least now we understand a little more about this woman in white. We know she's NOT a ghost - just someone on the outskirts of things - watching and hoping to help. I like this!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, so our ghost isn't a ghost, but she is to everyone but Annie and Sebastian. It really looks like Garth is in great danger, but why? Angel was the third warning, so something is going to happen soon, not only to Garth, but to many others. This was a really exceptional part, my friend. I'm sorry I can only give you a virtual six. Now to read the next part. You have your muse back!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Oh, so our ghost isn't a ghost, but she is to everyone but Annie and Sebastian. It really looks like Garth is in great danger, but why? Angel was the third warning, so something is going to happen soon, not only to Garth, but to many others. This was a really exceptional part, my friend. I'm sorry I can only give you a virtual six. Now to read the next part. You have your muse back!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
"Only time will tell(." and then she disappeared.) (, she whispered before disappearing.) This sounds better, in my opinion.
This is a great chapter but it needs to be written with a bit more feeling. Like the scene when the dog disappeared. Show how scared she was... 'Annie's body trembled as she called the dog... Her hands shook and she felt her heart tightened as a woman dressed in white appeared out of thin air...
Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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"Only time will tell(." and then she disappeared.) (, she whispered before disappearing.) This sounds better, in my opinion.
This is a great chapter but it needs to be written with a bit more feeling. Like the scene when the dog disappeared. Show how scared she was... 'Annie's body trembled as she called the dog... Her hands shook and she felt her heart tightened as a woman dressed in white appeared out of thin air...
Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mary Shifman
I really enjoyed this chapter. A lot of things happen, advancing the story quickly. I wonder who the lady in white really is? Is she real or a ghost? Who is after Garth? Loved the chapter!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I really enjoyed this chapter. A lot of things happen, advancing the story quickly. I wonder who the lady in white really is? Is she real or a ghost? Who is after Garth? Loved the chapter!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Just wondering why the cowboys would not try to not stand out, and particularly the guy in the red vest. They seem to draw attention to themselves, but if up to no good perhaps they should blend in more with the crowd of tourists ... just a thought. They make Garth suspicious straight away. The angel figure ... just wondering for why long she can appear and disappear ... most people wouldn't believe she was an angel or a spirit, and hence she will be in danger. However, it is all very interesting and intriguing, and I am looking forward to more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Just wondering why the cowboys would not try to not stand out, and particularly the guy in the red vest. They seem to draw attention to themselves, but if up to no good perhaps they should blend in more with the crowd of tourists ... just a thought. They make Garth suspicious straight away. The angel figure ... just wondering for why long she can appear and disappear ... most people wouldn't believe she was an angel or a spirit, and hence she will be in danger. However, it is all very interesting and intriguing, and I am looking forward to more.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
One warning is scary enough, but three might make an old boy's butt pucker. Or at least it would mine. So, I'm getting ready for something big to happen. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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One warning is scary enough, but three might make an old boy's butt pucker. Or at least it would mine. So, I'm getting ready for something big to happen. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
I am so glad you are back to the book. I enjoy all of your writing but I especially like reading your books. I can appreciate a writers block. I hope all is well with you.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I am so glad you are back to the book. I enjoy all of your writing but I especially like reading your books. I can appreciate a writers block. I hope all is well with you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
To me, so far you've done a great job of setting this up, with much mystery, Carol. Not knowing what you had in mind makes it difficult to offer any suggestions, but there may be other mystery writers who can help. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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To me, so far you've done a great job of setting this up, with much mystery, Carol. Not knowing what you had in mind makes it difficult to offer any suggestions, but there may be other mystery writers who can help. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
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You?re very welcome, Carol.
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You?re very welcome, Carol.
