Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Sunrise of Love Haiku
by jake cosmos aller

Great words to express your love for sunrise. I didn't know you live in Korea. You know, our Helen (lyenochka) is from Korea.

An Ekphrastic haiku means that you are inspired by a picture or painting so you need to add a picture. You can use this one.... click here

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

thanks I will go back and add a picture.

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 24-Jan-2022

Looks good :)

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

How fortunate to see both the sunrise and sunset. Very well written haiku to give your reader the wonder of the beauty of the sun rising and setting and in love.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

thanks glad you appreciated it

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, appealing piece. Gazing at an awe-inspiring sunrise, then returning home for more sleep--sounds like a plan to me. :-)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

yeah after watching the sunrise a nap is often in order

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is an intriguing haiku where the satori line is concerned. Your note about living on an island where both sunrise and sunset are readily visible. On board ship at sea, one may be similarly lucky

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

yeah that is true. I also enjoyed great sunrises and sunsets over the Carribbean sea when I lived in Barbados.