Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson

Good

I read your poem and enjoyed it. But this sentence - only gentle wing blowing, makes a sound. - distracted me from all your other creativity. Did you mean to write wind? Because wing blowing did not make sense to me but wind blowing did. Otherwise I would have given this poem 5 stars.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022

Thank you I did a spell check to?

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Great poem for the writing contest on rhyming. The last two lines make this poem unique and powerful: although treasured-
loving memories, a wish remembered. Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

Thank you

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I loved this! I hope you don't mind my take on this poem, and I pray I'm close. It made me think the old woman was content with what she had and really didn't make a wish. "No sound made as the coin fell." this tells me she threw no coin. The last Stanza convinced me she needed no more than what she had. As her wish for nothing but loving memories.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022

Thank you