On Bluish Pond
White Clouds Reflect On Its Glistening Veneer47 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' On Bluish Pond ' , is an extremely well-written piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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' On Bluish Pond ' , is an extremely well-written piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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duchess again, thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
di, you certainly deserved the stellar review.
Bless you and a hug,
the Duchess
Comment from LJbutterfly
I truly enjoyed reading your Nonet contest entry. Your artwork, choice of background color and words pair perfectly to deliver a beautiful presentation. The imagery provided by your poetry is dazzling on its own. This is a great start. Looking forward to more of your work. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I truly enjoyed reading your Nonet contest entry. Your artwork, choice of background color and words pair perfectly to deliver a beautiful presentation. The imagery provided by your poetry is dazzling on its own. This is a great start. Looking forward to more of your work. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Ljbutterfly... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from estory
I think your little poem captures that upbeat moment of enjoying the nature around you. I like this form, I like the swirling in effect and you had some real colorful images. Nice to hear from you again. estory
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I think your little poem captures that upbeat moment of enjoying the nature around you. I like this form, I like the swirling in effect and you had some real colorful images. Nice to hear from you again. estory
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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estory... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your nonet poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your nonet poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Raul... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Paul McFarland
I hope it's a start that continues. We need to enjoy nature more before mankind destroys it. This is a good nonet, and you should do quite well in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I hope it's a start that continues. We need to enjoy nature more before mankind destroys it. This is a good nonet, and you should do quite well in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Paul again, thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Terry Broxson
You are one fine poet. This is an excellent entry for the contest and should do well, good luck. The picture is well married for the poem. I look outside my condo from my balcony, all I see are new condos being built. I envy you!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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You are one fine poet. This is an excellent entry for the contest and should do well, good luck. The picture is well married for the poem. I look outside my condo from my balcony, all I see are new condos being built. I envy you!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Wow, I?m honored by your review... thanks so, so much. Yours, di
Comment from Malerie
Well done Nonet poem. These are such a challenge to me but your poem is well written and flows well. The picture adds a great visual to your words. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Well done Nonet poem. These are such a challenge to me but your poem is well written and flows well. The picture adds a great visual to your words. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Malerie... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from SimianSavant
This is a fairly minor suggestion but I would suggest a comma instead of a semicolon after muskovy. And it should read: nature's show.
As to your content, this is great, very picturesque, both with your words as well as the color/image you selected for the setting. Now it seems a little bit more of a jungle/tropical picture than I imagined for the setting of your story. I don't know if I've ever seen a squirrel in the jungle. Ducks and turtles though, definitely. Thanks for the read!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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This is a fairly minor suggestion but I would suggest a comma instead of a semicolon after muskovy. And it should read: nature's show.
As to your content, this is great, very picturesque, both with your words as well as the color/image you selected for the setting. Now it seems a little bit more of a jungle/tropical picture than I imagined for the setting of your story. I don't know if I've ever seen a squirrel in the jungle. Ducks and turtles though, definitely. Thanks for the read!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Your advice is sage. I added a comma... this is in Florida and they are everywhere. Even if it was a jungle kiddo, I am big on suspension of belief. You are my first gorilla reviewer. I honored and would love to hear from a cheetah or warthog. I will vote for you. Also, big fan of Cleveland zoo.
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Whoops what I meant to say was. Suspension of disbelief.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is an enjoyable poem to read. Your words are very descriptive and easy to read. The picture you used enhances your poem nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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This is an enjoyable poem to read. Your words are very descriptive and easy to read. The picture you used enhances your poem nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Hey Patty... thanks so much.
Comment from Cogitator
This seems to come from an attitude of gratitude. To appreciate thriving life around us is the best way for us to appreciate our own existence. My fervent wish is for humanity to return to nature's balance. Great job!!.John
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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This seems to come from an attitude of gratitude. To appreciate thriving life around us is the best way for us to appreciate our own existence. My fervent wish is for humanity to return to nature's balance. Great job!!.John
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Say hallelujah to that...
