On Bluish Pond
White Clouds Reflect On Its Glistening Veneer47 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
How lovely that you have a wonderful view outside your window and the the inspiration is evident in this wonderful nonet poem. I felt like I was there with you enjoying the view.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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How lovely that you have a wonderful view outside your window and the the inspiration is evident in this wonderful nonet poem. I felt like I was there with you enjoying the view.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Janet... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from mermaids
Excellent nonet form that captures a clear scene of nature. I like how you mention the ducks, squirrel and ibis. There is a good feeling as the reader sees this image of nature that is lively and reflects the clouds.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Excellent nonet form that captures a clear scene of nature. I like how you mention the ducks, squirrel and ibis. There is a good feeling as the reader sees this image of nature that is lively and reflects the clouds.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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mermaids... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from karenina
It's no secret I am a big fan of counting forms...the nonet and ethereal among them! I always think they present so well center-aligned, particularly when enhanced with a terrific photo or illustration. I'm in the frozen grips of New England right now and so especially warmed to your theme... Beautiful poem.
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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It's no secret I am a big fan of counting forms...the nonet and ethereal among them! I always think they present so well center-aligned, particularly when enhanced with a terrific photo or illustration. I'm in the frozen grips of New England right now and so especially warmed to your theme... Beautiful poem.
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Karenina... I feel the same way... it is such fun to make a story out of air. Thanks so much... yours, di xox I
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True that!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this nonet. Great picture of nature's beauty and good words to describe it. Like you, when I am at my computer, my back is to the windows, so I try and get up often and look out to see what is happening outside.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Well done on this nonet. Great picture of nature's beauty and good words to describe it. Like you, when I am at my computer, my back is to the windows, so I try and get up often and look out to see what is happening outside.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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anne... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
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You are welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, di.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a very good nonet with
a good topic and excellent nature imagery.
-I like your opening with "mama muscovy"
and "hatchlings running amok."
-Then it is like a parade of nature's creatures.
-You have good descriptions of each one,
and very good closing lines.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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-Nice image and presentation, di.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a very good nonet with
a good topic and excellent nature imagery.
-I like your opening with "mama muscovy"
and "hatchlings running amok."
-Then it is like a parade of nature's creatures.
-You have good descriptions of each one,
and very good closing lines.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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You write the best reviews... they always are clear, helpful and concise... thanks so, so much. You are appreciated... yours, di
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You are very welcome, di, and it's nice to know they are appreciated. I enjoy writing them for good work!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. I could visualize the scene you described in this entry. The words your chose were perfect for the description. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed reading this contest entry. I could visualize the scene you described in this entry. The words your chose were perfect for the description. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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barbara... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Artasylum a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed reading your offering for the nonet poetry contest. Hopefully it will be a strong contender in the contest. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Hello Artasylum a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed reading your offering for the nonet poetry contest. Hopefully it will be a strong contender in the contest. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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13th... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Jesse James Doty
To enjoy your natural surroundings before putting your head inside a computer is a start for you and for many who will read this post and enjoy your lovely artwork! The artwork is fantastic! I love your descriptions of the flora and fawna that surrounds your outdoor view. It is those little distractions what make a life feel more like living!
Have an enjoyable Tuesday!
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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To enjoy your natural surroundings before putting your head inside a computer is a start for you and for many who will read this post and enjoy your lovely artwork! The artwork is fantastic! I love your descriptions of the flora and fawna that surrounds your outdoor view. It is those little distractions what make a life feel more like living!
Have an enjoyable Tuesday!
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Jesse... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Frank Jauregui
A very nicely written Nonet, depicting a nature scene, that is well paired with the image you chose. Although the animals are missing from the image they are vividly painted in thre reader's mind which is a compliment to your writing. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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A very nicely written Nonet, depicting a nature scene, that is well paired with the image you chose. Although the animals are missing from the image they are vividly painted in thre reader's mind which is a compliment to your writing. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Frank... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from amahra
Wow, is that artwork of the view from the back porch of your condo? If so, double wow! I like your peon and think it's very beautiful and well written. I wish the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Wow, is that artwork of the view from the back porch of your condo? If so, double wow! I like your peon and think it's very beautiful and well written. I wish the best in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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amahra... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
