On Bluish Pond
White Clouds Reflect On Its Glistening Veneer47 total reviews
Comment from Terrilou
You paint such a lovely, peaceful picture of Nature doing its thing. Your poem makes me want to find such a place and spend some time there. A place to escape the hustle bustle of the life most of us live. Thank you for the beautiful poetic escape!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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You paint such a lovely, peaceful picture of Nature doing its thing. Your poem makes me want to find such a place and spend some time there. A place to escape the hustle bustle of the life most of us live. Thank you for the beautiful poetic escape!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Wow, Terrilou... what an honor and blessing thanks for your five stellar-plus review... Can't wait to read more from my new friend. yours, di
Comment from rspoet
Hello Diana,
You've painted a wonderful, colorful picture with your words
that flow down the nonet form to make that nice v-shape.
Excellent imagery in each line, hard to beat nature's show.
That photograph looks like a great place to be too.
Well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Hello Diana,
You've painted a wonderful, colorful picture with your words
that flow down the nonet form to make that nice v-shape.
Excellent imagery in each line, hard to beat nature's show.
That photograph looks like a great place to be too.
Well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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RS... It is always a treat and an honor when you stop by my shop and review... as I have told you before your writing inspires me... di
Comment from Boogienights
This is very descriptive and lovely. It sounds like a place I'd like to spend an afternoon, just watching. You have a wonderful window seat to nature. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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This is very descriptive and lovely. It sounds like a place I'd like to spend an afternoon, just watching. You have a wonderful window seat to nature. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Boogienights...thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from dmt1967
Your words paint the countryside with all the animals. I can see the wildlife vividly, in my minds eye. It feels real and beautiful. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Your words paint the countryside with all the animals. I can see the wildlife vividly, in my minds eye. It feels real and beautiful. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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dmt...thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Michele Harber
What a beautifully done Nonet. You described the scene so beautifully and lovingly that you made me simultaneously want to visit the scene, and keep my distance so as not to disturb the sanctity of nature. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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What a beautifully done Nonet. You described the scene so beautifully and lovingly that you made me simultaneously want to visit the scene, and keep my distance so as not to disturb the sanctity of nature. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Michele... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
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My pleasure!
Comment from Reese Turner
Interesting place. Nice combo of picture and poem. Not sure they would have RV parking, but I would like to drop by. Enjoyed it. Reminds me of places I have seen in my youth.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Interesting place. Nice combo of picture and poem. Not sure they would have RV parking, but I would like to drop by. Enjoyed it. Reminds me of places I have seen in my youth.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Reese... thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from sue133
I really loved your poem. I could picture the scene clearly in my mind and it left a super, warm feeling. I felt that I was actually there lapping it all up in that one beautiful moment. Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I really loved your poem. I could picture the scene clearly in my mind and it left a super, warm feeling. I felt that I was actually there lapping it all up in that one beautiful moment. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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sue...thanks so, so much I really appreciate your stellar review. yours, di
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a gorgeous and vibrant presentation. And then not a wasted or unnecessary word in the entire poem.
I come away from reading this feeling happy, and filled with the glory of nature's show.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Such a gorgeous and vibrant presentation. And then not a wasted or unnecessary word in the entire poem.
I come away from reading this feeling happy, and filled with the glory of nature's show.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Gloria... I have a few North Stars on this site and you are one... always an honor. dixo
Comment from Frank Malley
Although some of the nature it features has its habitat a bit south of where I live, I enjoyed this poem because I am a lifelong nature watcher who every year thrills to see painted turtles basking and blue herons fishing. Art Asylum paints a great picture with her examples of nature. (I think the final 'natures' should be 'nature's. And maybe 'Nature's', personifying the Goddess who is actually visible via her presences everywhere, unlike other more celebrated....metaphyical entities.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Although some of the nature it features has its habitat a bit south of where I live, I enjoyed this poem because I am a lifelong nature watcher who every year thrills to see painted turtles basking and blue herons fishing. Art Asylum paints a great picture with her examples of nature. (I think the final 'natures' should be 'nature's. And maybe 'Nature's', personifying the Goddess who is actually visible via her presences everywhere, unlike other more celebrated....metaphyical entities.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Frank defintley south... Miami area... and I love your review very up my feeling around life... thanks for stopping by... yours, di
Comment from MissMerri
Such a descriptive Nonet! I read it a few times, and enjoyed the lovely glimpse into nature. My only suggestion might be to move the apostrophe on natures so that it is between the e and the s. I cannot imagine how natures can be plural in this context, but maybe I am mistaken. Anyway, I very much enjoyed your poem and hope it does well in this contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Such a descriptive Nonet! I read it a few times, and enjoyed the lovely glimpse into nature. My only suggestion might be to move the apostrophe on natures so that it is between the e and the s. I cannot imagine how natures can be plural in this context, but maybe I am mistaken. Anyway, I very much enjoyed your poem and hope it does well in this contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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As every Miss Merri I always appreciate any help that I'm given... thanks a bunch... yours, di
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As every Miss Merri I always appreciate any help that I'm given... thanks a bunch... yours, di
