Love Should Be Eternal
A one and forever love40 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Stay careful with your selection,
for it's a lifetime connection.
I've found the one and she found me,
we'll be as one, eternally."
Very well said on this. Even when the one we love is taken home, our love still lives on.
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"Stay careful with your selection,
for it's a lifetime connection.
I've found the one and she found me,
we'll be as one, eternally."
Very well said on this. Even when the one we love is taken home, our love still lives on.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing your note and poem, jaybird.
-You wrote a very good poem about finding a true love
and how important that is.
-I agree with this line:
"Love's meant to last throughout all time."
-It makes all the difference when you fine the right person.
-Have a good day and rest of your week.
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-Thanks for sharing your note and poem, jaybird.
-You wrote a very good poem about finding a true love
and how important that is.
-I agree with this line:
"Love's meant to last throughout all time."
-It makes all the difference when you fine the right person.
-Have a good day and rest of your week.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Love Should Be Eternal ' , is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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' Love Should Be Eternal ' , is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from amahra
Like all of your poems, you tell a great and engaging story about life. Great job as always.
Love's meant to last throughout all time,
getting better, like aging wine.
It ignores money, race, power
and blooms like a glorious flower. [my favorite stanza]
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Like all of your poems, you tell a great and engaging story about life. Great job as always.
Love's meant to last throughout all time,
getting better, like aging wine.
It ignores money, race, power
and blooms like a glorious flower. [my favorite stanza]
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Jay,
This is the way it should be for all. But some aren't lucky for have this eternal love because they didn't choose correctly and ended up getting divorced.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
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Jay,
This is the way it should be for all. But some aren't lucky for have this eternal love because they didn't choose correctly and ended up getting divorced.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very good sonnet. This poem describes what love is and then, in the end, brings in the poet's own experience. The last couplet is the highlight of the poem.
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This is a very good sonnet. This poem describes what love is and then, in the end, brings in the poet's own experience. The last couplet is the highlight of the poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
Another very good poem about the path and trails of life. I do confess I had a false start, but fortunately, I found the right one for over forty years. I do hope you are right, and we meet again. Great work.
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Another very good poem about the path and trails of life. I do confess I had a false start, but fortunately, I found the right one for over forty years. I do hope you are right, and we meet again. Great work.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from ESOSTINE
Another good work there, dear Jay. It's truly a wonderful experience when love unite to ignite an everlasting fire that burns to light the way. Lucky are those who find true love! Well penned. Thanks for sharing your wisdom.
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Another good work there, dear Jay. It's truly a wonderful experience when love unite to ignite an everlasting fire that burns to light the way. Lucky are those who find true love! Well penned. Thanks for sharing your wisdom.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Once again an amazing piece of writing. I love your chosen words about love. Stay careful with your selection,for it's a lifetime connection.I've found the one and she found me,
we'll be as one, eternally.
And when our time on earth is through-We'll start our after life anew. Just beautiful.
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Once again an amazing piece of writing. I love your chosen words about love. Stay careful with your selection,for it's a lifetime connection.I've found the one and she found me,
we'll be as one, eternally.
And when our time on earth is through-We'll start our after life anew. Just beautiful.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from phil nelson
I really like the matter-of-fact confidence of this poem, and hope that you will start that next part of your love whenever God feels you are ready--as always a most enjoyable sonnet full of wisdom and hope.
All the Best!
Phil
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I really like the matter-of-fact confidence of this poem, and hope that you will start that next part of your love whenever God feels you are ready--as always a most enjoyable sonnet full of wisdom and hope.
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
