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Through The Eyes of a Sheep

From paddock to platter: Kazakh cuisine.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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You have a wicked pen that drips plays on words and innuendos. I enjoyed reading these immensely. I am not totally sure that you followed closely the dictates of the contest. But I don't care, I enjoyed my read a lot and when I work out who you are will be following your work from now on.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022

Comment from Pantygynt
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I enjoyed reading this as a writing exercise and as one who lives na Welsh sheep farm - no I am not the farmer - it is just that my house is surrounded be farmland populated mainly by sheep. I also happen to enjoy eating sheep meat, both lamb and, when I can get it which isn't often these days, mutton. I have also been at an Arabian fadhl (meal) where the eyeballs were served, like you say, as an honour.

I did wonder if a piece of writing that purports to have been written by a sheep should be posted as non fiction, even when everything it describes is factual. That could make an interesting point for discussion, I think.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    Thanks for your comments... you've been to interesting places. As for the non-fiction category, let's just say the story could be written by me, reincarnated - carnated meat.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Fantastic idea, concept, theme, and interesting taletelling a life, thoughts, views, viewpoints, attitudes, conduct living a lamb, how humans tell and think of lambs; you as a lamb, a dumb animal as man says about a lamb; you are a lamb with intelligence, conscience, and you tell about how you are cooked and tasted by different names and dishes in different countries; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your detailed review.
Comment from oliver818
Exceptional
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This is so funny, I really loved it. I love that this is a pun-loving sheep, ewe etc, very clever. I'm sure this will be very popular in the competition. Thanks for sharing this

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    Thank you for appreciating my small attempt at humour. How nice to see a 6 rating for the first review! Would you eat the eyeball?
reply by oliver818 on 22-Jan-2022
    Maybe not, haha although I do live in China and occasionally we get dishes with eyes or heads, like duck.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
    I've been in China too - I remember dipping into Mongolian hot pot and pulling out a rooster's head.