The rain
talking to the sky6 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
I think you might have described my chronic pain too, Iza. I always know when the weather is going to change with the barometric pressures. My body lets me know. Thanks for sharing.
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I think you might have described my chronic pain too, Iza. I always know when the weather is going to change with the barometric pressures. My body lets me know. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
Comment from estory
Odd that you had rain up there and we had snow down here. But your post articulates that sense of the life giving element of the rain, its ability to transform a dead landscape into a living one, and wash away the dirt and dust of life. estory
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Odd that you had rain up there and we had snow down here. But your post articulates that sense of the life giving element of the rain, its ability to transform a dead landscape into a living one, and wash away the dirt and dust of life. estory
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lovely chat to the sky, with some lovely answers to questions we all ask, Iza. I just found a couple of nits, below. I enjoyed the chat, my friend. Sandra xx
knock-out(,) answer[,] my friend. = knock-out answer, my friend.
See(,)yah in the rain. =Remover comma
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Lovely chat to the sky, with some lovely answers to questions we all ask, Iza. I just found a couple of nits, below. I enjoyed the chat, my friend. Sandra xx
knock-out(,) answer[,] my friend. = knock-out answer, my friend.
See(,)yah in the rain. =Remover comma
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
Comment from lyenochka
That's a sweet conversation that you shared with your friend, the Sky. There are so many questions we can ask as we don't understand why God allows sin and sorrow and so much evil to continue on Earth. But He has it under His control.
"Why God gave us pain?" (Why did God give us pain?)
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That's a sweet conversation that you shared with your friend, the Sky. There are so many questions we can ask as we don't understand why God allows sin and sorrow and so much evil to continue on Earth. But He has it under His control.
"Why God gave us pain?" (Why did God give us pain?)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a joyous short story. I enjoyed the positive feel of this read. The reference to - the circles left by the rain clapping - is a descriptive one. Very good.
No rain, no game, no pain!"
With this line - do you mean....
No rain, no gain, no pain!"
Well done and thank you for sharing.
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This is a joyous short story. I enjoyed the positive feel of this read. The reference to - the circles left by the rain clapping - is a descriptive one. Very good.
No rain, no game, no pain!"
With this line - do you mean....
No rain, no gain, no pain!"
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your true story, Iza. I enjoy the rain, the clouds, the rainbow, well, everything about it. Yes, rain is a gift. Yes, it masks one's tears. The picture is perfect. Your words are well chosen and create great imagery.
I looked up, and I heared: (heard) " I feel you". I looked at my friend
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your true story, Iza. I enjoy the rain, the clouds, the rainbow, well, everything about it. Yes, rain is a gift. Yes, it masks one's tears. The picture is perfect. Your words are well chosen and create great imagery.
I looked up, and I heared: (heard) " I feel you". I looked at my friend
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
