I Promised To Wait
You'll never be alone because20 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Oh, Wow, what a tear-jerker this story turned out to be. You are a master storyteller. I loved this short and well-written read. It is absolutely perfect. Your endings are a work of art. Great work.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Oh, Wow, what a tear-jerker this story turned out to be. You are a master storyteller. I loved this short and well-written read. It is absolutely perfect. Your endings are a work of art. Great work.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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You are so kind to me. I thank you so much... I write what's in my heart at the time and often it's gut wrenching. My poor characters carry the brunt of my life. LOL
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I like the way you start your stories in the middle of the action and let the background unfold gradually. I'm assuming the woman in this story is an angle, sent to get the little boy, not knowing Emmy was there also. Even though the story mentions murder, it is basically a story of the love and devotion of a little boy.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I like the way you start your stories in the middle of the action and let the background unfold gradually. I'm assuming the woman in this story is an angle, sent to get the little boy, not knowing Emmy was there also. Even though the story mentions murder, it is basically a story of the love and devotion of a little boy.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is a deep write. For, when you plan to meet
a loved one on the other side...they never expect
that it will really happen. You are very creative.
Keep Writing
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is a deep write. For, when you plan to meet
a loved one on the other side...they never expect
that it will really happen. You are very creative.
Keep Writing
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you! In order for me to face all the tragedy in my life, I must believe that my loved ones are waiting for me. I appreciate your review very much.
Smiles, CArol
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a sad but beautiful story. At first, I thought he was waiting on his mother but then realized that it was the girl he had promised not to leave. Now, they were able to go together to heaven. I enjoyed your story very much.
(((((HUGS)))))
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is a sad but beautiful story. At first, I thought he was waiting on his mother but then realized that it was the girl he had promised not to leave. Now, they were able to go together to heaven. I enjoyed your story very much.
(((((HUGS)))))
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Yes, you got it! He was already dead but refused to leave his little sister behind. It was a very special moment to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Hi Carol. Such a sad story, with so many relevant and meaningful elements. Abuse, murder, suicide, horrific family environment .... Poor Timmy - couldn't die until his sister was ready to go with him? Or died, but would not leave for heaven without his sister? He kept his promise, poor child. Well written, but so very dark!
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Hi Carol. Such a sad story, with so many relevant and meaningful elements. Abuse, murder, suicide, horrific family environment .... Poor Timmy - couldn't die until his sister was ready to go with him? Or died, but would not leave for heaven without his sister? He kept his promise, poor child. Well written, but so very dark!
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Carol, the lady whose imagination never sleeps. Keeps unsuspecting readers from expecting the unexpected so that she can continually catch them off guard. And I must say, it's always fun and entertaining. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Carol, the lady whose imagination never sleeps. Keeps unsuspecting readers from expecting the unexpected so that she can continually catch them off guard. And I must say, it's always fun and entertaining. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was a sad story on many accounts, Carol. You told it well. The details are well presented and carry the meaning of your words. It's often sad what young children think, say, and believe. To keep his promise was the most important thing for Timmy no matter what.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This was a sad story on many accounts, Carol. You told it well. The details are well presented and carry the meaning of your words. It's often sad what young children think, say, and believe. To keep his promise was the most important thing for Timmy no matter what.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
I had to read this a couple times to alleviate my confusion. At least I hope, There is a dead dad who was shot by mom. The main character is an angel. Her role was to pick up the souls of the two dead children. Did the mom kill herself? Is what I got out of the story, what you meant?
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I had to read this a couple times to alleviate my confusion. At least I hope, There is a dead dad who was shot by mom. The main character is an angel. Her role was to pick up the souls of the two dead children. Did the mom kill herself? Is what I got out of the story, what you meant?
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
You'll never be alone because
I Promised To Wait
Begin Again
My what a sad story, I liked the ending, it was beautiful ---
A brilliant glow filled the room as the woman recognized the girl as her mission. Her arms gathered around the two children, and they ascended into the light as police officers spilled into the room of death.A brilliant glow filled the room as the woman recognized the girl as her mission. Her arms gathered around the two children, and they ascended into the light as police officers spilled into the room of death.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You'll never be alone because
I Promised To Wait
Begin Again
My what a sad story, I liked the ending, it was beautiful ---
A brilliant glow filled the room as the woman recognized the girl as her mission. Her arms gathered around the two children, and they ascended into the light as police officers spilled into the room of death.A brilliant glow filled the room as the woman recognized the girl as her mission. Her arms gathered around the two children, and they ascended into the light as police officers spilled into the room of death.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your story is very sad, but it is very well written. Everything flows so smoothly, leading us up to the climax. How sad for what these children had experienced. Great job on this one.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Your story is very sad, but it is very well written. Everything flows so smoothly, leading us up to the climax. How sad for what these children had experienced. Great job on this one.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
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You are welcome, Carol
