Comment from estory

Excellent

I think there's a great modern feel to this. Wonderful rhythm. And I liked the listing format. Great echoing effects, a nice skeptical, cynical voice to drive the point home. estory

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great use of long four-syllable words to create a busy feeling and rap-song like feel in your poem. I'm not sure what it means but I think you are making some political/social commentary.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought alliteration here big time Iza with your crazy poem about life and its ups and downs, as long as we have a celebration in our liberation, we will be fine, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022