Michael Angelo Vs. Fly
Thoughts of Michael Angelo as he painted his ceiling.7 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A touch of humour, especially with trying to figure the different perspectives, and also thinking of how annoying it would have been for Michelangelo had a fly spoiled his work! Best wishes for your very different and unique entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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A touch of humour, especially with trying to figure the different perspectives, and also thinking of how annoying it would have been for Michelangelo had a fly spoiled his work! Best wishes for your very different and unique entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you Wendy, I appreciate your comments and review!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations for a well etched out Nonet poetry structure; with a spoiler content to match.
The objective correlative of your reminisces the semblance of loose dirt hanging down in the form of a fly on Michael Angelo's on going painting of his ceiling.
The work highlights the marring impact of the fly on the canvass; and Michael's sighs in a bid to rid the canvass of the fly.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of aesthetic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Congratulations for a well etched out Nonet poetry structure; with a spoiler content to match.
The objective correlative of your reminisces the semblance of loose dirt hanging down in the form of a fly on Michael Angelo's on going painting of his ceiling.
The work highlights the marring impact of the fly on the canvass; and Michael's sighs in a bid to rid the canvass of the fly.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of aesthetic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Lloyd for for you insightful review and rating!
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from lindafisher
Never thought of Michael Angelo as Mike. Really enjoyed your version of him creating his master piece whilst being annoyed by a fly. Looking up which is down. Great perspective.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Never thought of Michael Angelo as Mike. Really enjoyed your version of him creating his master piece whilst being annoyed by a fly. Looking up which is down. Great perspective.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Blessings, Linda. Thank your for your review and rating!
Comment from Thatguypk
I like nonets that have a logical flow, rather than single or isolated words. Yours reads like a well formed sentence, and your subject matter is clever and appealing. Very well written. I love your authors note of explanation also. It's a clever concept. Thank you for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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I like nonets that have a logical flow, rather than single or isolated words. Yours reads like a well formed sentence, and your subject matter is clever and appealing. Very well written. I love your authors note of explanation also. It's a clever concept. Thank you for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your insightful comments and rating! Also thanks for taking the time to read my notes.
Comment from Louise Muller
Well done on creating something that is pleasant to read because it is so relatable. We have all had encounters with pesky flies, and that is why I enjoyed your poem so much.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Well done on creating something that is pleasant to read because it is so relatable. We have all had encounters with pesky flies, and that is why I enjoyed your poem so much.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you Louise, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm grateful for your review and rating!
Comment from AnnieDawn
What a thought-provoking poem. I love it. You have a way of creating a way of making one think and adding a bit of humor to your post. This one was well worth reading and I hope to run into more of your work. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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What a thought-provoking poem. I love it. You have a way of creating a way of making one think and adding a bit of humor to your post. This one was well worth reading and I hope to run into more of your work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you Annie for your review and rating.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The poem flowed nicely throughout the piece and the words didn't seem to be forced;-)
The imagery was perfect for this piece!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The poem flowed nicely throughout the piece and the words didn't seem to be forced;-)
The imagery was perfect for this piece!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Blessings Melodie. Thank you much for your kind words; excellent review and rating!
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