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Unexpected Event

A woman struck down at the prime of life

2 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made effective use of your thirteen syllables in this expressive, sad, timely poem. A ninety-year-old may survive Covid (or another illness)
that kills a young person.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thank you for your read and feedback.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Good entry for the Lune contest. This is a story that has been repeated over and over during the last two years. Sad when younger people have been victims of Covid.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thanks for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Jan-2022
    You are welcome