Hope Emerges Through the Rain
Blessing...43 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your lune contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. The picture is perfect. It illustrates your well chosen words well. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your poem is uplifting with the idea that even rain can't hide God's gift.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your lune contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. The picture is perfect. It illustrates your well chosen words well. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your poem is uplifting with the idea that even rain can't hide God's gift.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
Very nice Lune.
Yes, Florida is the only place I've seen where it can be pouring down raining and the sun be shinning as bright as can be.
I enjoyed your Lune and hope you do well in the competition.
Thanks for sharing.
Gee
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Very nice Lune.
Yes, Florida is the only place I've seen where it can be pouring down raining and the sun be shinning as bright as can be.
I enjoyed your Lune and hope you do well in the competition.
Thanks for sharing.
Gee
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Ashley Shipley
A wonderful image to accompany a wonderful poem. The imagery is so strong and the correlation of hope and approaching rainbow is really beautiful. Well done!
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A wonderful image to accompany a wonderful poem. The imagery is so strong and the correlation of hope and approaching rainbow is really beautiful. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Gert sherwood
Blessing...
Hope Emerges Through the Rain
Unknown author smiles to your lune
I picture a part of cloud and the sun peeking through the cloud along with the ( perfect image for your poem. Both the rain and the balmy sun are the divine gifts from God
Gert
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Blessing...
Hope Emerges Through the Rain
Unknown author smiles to your lune
I picture a part of cloud and the sun peeking through the cloud along with the ( perfect image for your poem. Both the rain and the balmy sun are the divine gifts from God
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like the overall imagery of your Lune verse and illustration. IMHO, your initial cap is unnecessary. I would also recommend you include some dash or squiggle after your middle line to set off your final thought. In my mind, it complements and contrasts with your first two lines.
You are lucky for this view, I have sun but current temps just above zero degrees Fahrenheit (-;
Good luck in the voting.
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Do like the overall imagery of your Lune verse and illustration. IMHO, your initial cap is unnecessary. I would also recommend you include some dash or squiggle after your middle line to set off your final thought. In my mind, it complements and contrasts with your first two lines.
You are lucky for this view, I have sun but current temps just above zero degrees Fahrenheit (-;
Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A great poem for the prompt. Thanks for the note about Del Rey Beach. The poem gets at the essence of blessings that come through the rainy times. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A great poem for the prompt. Thanks for the note about Del Rey Beach. The poem gets at the essence of blessings that come through the rainy times. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, rain does give us hope as it gives nature hope. Without rain we'd have a huge problem.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, rain does give us hope as it gives nature hope. Without rain we'd have a huge problem.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an unusual picture, but perfect for your Lune poem. I wonder which came first? The words fit so well, and I do like it when we get a shower and sunshine together. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
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What an unusual picture, but perfect for your Lune poem. I wonder which came first? The words fit so well, and I do like it when we get a shower and sunshine together. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Fellow unnamed poet a happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing your lune poem contest entry, it is technically sound and will hopeful be a contender in the contest. good luck and have a good day!
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Hello Fellow unnamed poet a happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing your lune poem contest entry, it is technically sound and will hopeful be a contender in the contest. good luck and have a good day!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Thatguypk
That happens quite frequently, here in Ireland, bright sunshine, but a passing cloud spilling its rain on a small area. I agree it looks quite heavenly, almost magical. Nicely expressed phenomenon. :-)
PK
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That happens quite frequently, here in Ireland, bright sunshine, but a passing cloud spilling its rain on a small area. I agree it looks quite heavenly, almost magical. Nicely expressed phenomenon. :-)
PK
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
