Magic Dream
A sip of magic dew in a magic garden.14 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You did an amazing job meeting the contest requirements and I could imagine the scene perfectly with even the extra sounds and itches of growing a pair of wings! Hope you did well in the contest! Sorry I didn't know when it was.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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You did an amazing job meeting the contest requirements and I could imagine the scene perfectly with even the extra sounds and itches of growing a pair of wings! Hope you did well in the contest! Sorry I didn't know when it was.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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I always have fun writing fantasy poetry. It seems to come the easiest for me. Thanks for reviewing this one. It did take second place. My grandkids love it when I send one to them to read and have a grama wall where they make frames and hang them. Makes my heart beat a little faster.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very cute and imaginative. It was enjoyable to read. The rhyme and rhythm give it some bounce and was easy and fun to read aloud. Your words are very descriptive making it easy to picture what was happening. Good luck with the contest. I would think you have a winner here.
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Very cute and imaginative. It was enjoyable to read. The rhyme and rhythm give it some bounce and was easy and fun to read aloud. Your words are very descriptive making it easy to picture what was happening. Good luck with the contest. I would think you have a winner here.
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. This was fun to write. I guess I am just a kid at heart as I love to do fantasy poems and stories. Have a great New Year.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
I love the fantasy of fairy wings..how fabulous. Was he dreaming or was it real? I will never know. :)
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Gypsy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
I love the fantasy of fairy wings..how fabulous. Was he dreaming or was it real? I will never know. :)
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and vote of confidence. I had so much fun writing this one.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
That is true fairy tale with all the elements of fantastic transformations followed by the wash of reality that goes with so many legends of the doings of the little people and the fairies.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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That is true fairy tale with all the elements of fantastic transformations followed by the wash of reality that goes with so many legends of the doings of the little people and the fairies.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reviewing this poem. I really had fun writing this one. I like to do the fantasy poetry and stories. Just a kid at heart I guess.
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Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your rhymed poem. I had to take it slowly though, as I got my tongue in a twist! A lovely fantastical story, gorgeously descriptive and in perfect rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your rhymed poem. I had to take it slowly though, as I got my tongue in a twist! A lovely fantastical story, gorgeously descriptive and in perfect rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I had so much fun writing this poem and I enjoy the fantasy styles. Kid at heart still, I guess. I doubt that I could have done it any differently. Have a great 2022 and God bless.
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You're welcome! Doing great in the booth... Good Luck!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wonderbar. Loved it. Felt as if I could take flight. The photo selected was superb as the filament leafage on the right were as if the butterfly had yet not left.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Wonderbar. Loved it. Felt as if I could take flight. The photo selected was superb as the filament leafage on the right were as if the butterfly had yet not left.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I had so much fun writing this one. I love to write fantasy poems and stories. I guess it shows I am a child at heart. Have a great 2022 and God bless.
Comment from Gee
Very nice poem.
Too bad you could keep those wings.
I hope you do well in your contest.
This seemed like a difficult topic, but you did it really well
Good Luck and thanks for sharing.
Gee
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Very nice poem.
Too bad you could keep those wings.
I hope you do well in your contest.
This seemed like a difficult topic, but you did it really well
Good Luck and thanks for sharing.
Gee
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I had so much fun writing this one. I love to write fantasy poems and stories. I guess it shows I am a child at heart. Have a great 2022 and God bless.
Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful. How beautifully and carefully created this poem is. I enjoyed it very much as it met the contest requirements in an original and creative way, almost reminding me of Alice in Wonderland. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Wonderful. How beautifully and carefully created this poem is. I enjoyed it very much as it met the contest requirements in an original and creative way, almost reminding me of Alice in Wonderland. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I had so much fun writing this one. I love to write fantasy poems and stories. I guess it shows I am a child at heart. Have a great 2022 and God bless.
Comment from harmony13
I really enjoyed this fanstasy poem. The author's words were engaging,
interesting, clear, mystical and creative. I imagined flying above the
garden with awe. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I really enjoyed this fanstasy poem. The author's words were engaging,
interesting, clear, mystical and creative. I imagined flying above the
garden with awe. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind review. I had a blast writing this poem. The fantasy poems and stories are always fun to write and I have always had a wild imagination so putting it to use now is fun. Have a great weekend and God bless.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an awesome write. Love it. This is my favourite part. Twas then I heard a loud "pop!" "pop!" as wings sprang from my back
The sound when they unfolded was like thunder when it cracks
I looked and they were shiny sparkling silver and then gold
Then all the rainbow colors from the palest to the bold. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This is an awesome write. Love it. This is my favourite part. Twas then I heard a loud "pop!" "pop!" as wings sprang from my back
The sound when they unfolded was like thunder when it cracks
I looked and they were shiny sparkling silver and then gold
Then all the rainbow colors from the palest to the bold. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate that you gave me an idea of the part that you really liked. It is helpful in writing other pieces. Have a great New Year and God bless.