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Comment from ESOSTINE
That was a good entry for the contest, "Write a Lune". How a caterpillar metamorphoses into a beautiful flying creature. Well done, and please keep them coming. Nice to read your work.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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That was a good entry for the contest, "Write a Lune". How a caterpillar metamorphoses into a beautiful flying creature. Well done, and please keep them coming. Nice to read your work.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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thank you esostine :)
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Write a Lune Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The poem flowed well and didn't seem to be forced;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Perfect entry for the Write a Lune Contest and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The poem flowed well and didn't seem to be forced;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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thank you melodie :-)
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Comment from jwsteele
You've got it down. From here, you write great poems. Just deep enough to reveal the thought, feeling without out too much psychological baggage attached to drag the moment into the quagmire of monkey mind. Nice write.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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You've got it down. From here, you write great poems. Just deep enough to reveal the thought, feeling without out too much psychological baggage attached to drag the moment into the quagmire of monkey mind. Nice write.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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thank you jw :-)
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done Haiku about a very simple yet profound event -the birth of a butterfly from the lowly caterpillar, a true miracle of transformation that takes place every springtime.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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nicely done Haiku about a very simple yet profound event -the birth of a butterfly from the lowly caterpillar, a true miracle of transformation that takes place every springtime.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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thank you jake :)
Comment from Louise Muller
Even though poetry isn't my preferred genre, this is a great example of how writing can create a beautiful piece of art. Your piece is delicate, intriguing, and unique. Good job. This is what writing is all about.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Even though poetry isn't my preferred genre, this is a great example of how writing can create a beautiful piece of art. Your piece is delicate, intriguing, and unique. Good job. This is what writing is all about.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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thank you louise :)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Shelley, CONGRATULATIONS my sweet friend on
a well deserved win...
in a few short words...you turned a caterpillar...
into a beautiful butterfly...
very nicely written sweet girl...Ilove your poem...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Hi Shelley, CONGRATULATIONS my sweet friend on
a well deserved win...
in a few short words...you turned a caterpillar...
into a beautiful butterfly...
very nicely written sweet girl...Ilove your poem...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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awww thank you so much linda :-)
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your so welcome sweet girl...
smiling back at you...
love xxoo
Comment from Ben Colder
It is amazing how nature can perform various ways of life. From under the microscope to the nature of beauty to the eyes. Well done with this short poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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It is amazing how nature can perform various ways of life. From under the microscope to the nature of beauty to the eyes. Well done with this short poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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thank you ben:)
Comment from DeboraDyess
Well, I can certainly see why you won this contest. You took 13 syllables and painted a picture! Perfect, peaceful, and a joy to read! Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Well, I can certainly see why you won this contest. You took 13 syllables and painted a picture! Perfect, peaceful, and a joy to read! Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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thank you deb :-)
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-3-5 lune for the contest
with excellent description of the transformation
of the caterpillar to butterfly.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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This is an excellent 5-3-5 lune for the contest
with excellent description of the transformation
of the caterpillar to butterfly.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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thank you robert :-)
Comment from June Sargent
In a few short lines you've captured the complete metamorphosis of a caterpillar into a beautiful butterfly! It is an image that makes our hearts fly with it. Lovely.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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In a few short lines you've captured the complete metamorphosis of a caterpillar into a beautiful butterfly! It is an image that makes our hearts fly with it. Lovely.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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cool! thank you june :)