Scene from a Croquet Game 8
a scene with Pons and Ned9 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
scene with Pons and Ned
Scene from a Croquet Game 8
Bill Schott
I must of missed the first part of your writing about the
Croquet Game. I had to laugh when Ned said--
Ned:
No sweat, Cuz. Next time we'll use one a my bowlin' balls.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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scene with Pons and Ned
Scene from a Croquet Game 8
Bill Schott
I must of missed the first part of your writing about the
Croquet Game. I had to laugh when Ned said--
Ned:
No sweat, Cuz. Next time we'll use one a my bowlin' balls.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Gert
Comment from Earl Corp
This seems to be a marathon croquet match that will never. You seem to be having a a lot of fun writing this script. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This seems to be a marathon croquet match that will never. You seem to be having a a lot of fun writing this script. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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It was fun, but all good things must yada yada yada.
Comment from nomi338
Hasty exits are rarely a good sign. Could the boys be up to no good? ZED/RED has a nasty job to do gathering up vermin as it were. BED needs to revived or put out of his misery, either way. Oh boy, what a crew.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Hasty exits are rarely a good sign. Could the boys be up to no good? ZED/RED has a nasty job to do gathering up vermin as it were. BED needs to revived or put out of his misery, either way. Oh boy, what a crew.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The croquet crowd is rather unique.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! Just now as the game is about to end they notice that Zed is gone? I am still hoping for Zed to get a speaking part. Maybe he will come back.
Anyone seen Zed. (question mark here?)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Oh no! Just now as the game is about to end they notice that Zed is gone? I am still hoping for Zed to get a speaking part. Maybe he will come back.
Anyone seen Zed. (question mark here?)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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He actually spoke when saying he didn't have any lines. Maybe he can be a D-zed.
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Okay! 😊 I just thought Zed talked when Red took him over.
Comment from judiverse
Ned and Pons were good sports, even though they were eliminated. The winner of the croquet game is going to be announced and Led anticipates winning. Zed apparently had quickly disappeared, but that's to be expected. Quirky script and characters. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Ned and Pons were good sports, even though they were eliminated. The winner of the croquet game is going to be announced and Led anticipates winning. Zed apparently had quickly disappeared, but that's to be expected. Quirky script and characters. judi
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Judi. I really have drawn this out. Time to put it asleep and try something else.
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You're welcome. You could go ahead and wrap it up. It takes a lot of work to make croquet interesting. judi
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This guys are getting more absurd. They want to use a bowling ball for croquet and they will put some rats and bugs in opponent's shoes. I like the absurdity.
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This guys are getting more absurd. They want to use a bowling ball for croquet and they will put some rats and bugs in opponent's shoes. I like the absurdity.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Actually, this is real life. The absurdity comes when they do this on snowshoe roller-skates, left-handed, blind-folded, and wearing hospital gowns and disposable poopy-pants.
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
ARE YOU SERIOUS??!! People are just now beginning to notice the disappearance of the best actor among them???? Cooommme on!!! And this is supposed to be believable? Dude!
hehehe
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Bill,
ARE YOU SERIOUS??!! People are just now beginning to notice the disappearance of the best actor among them???? Cooommme on!!! And this is supposed to be believable? Dude!
hehehe
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The credibility has been weak at best, I think. But - Hey! -- Cup-o-sghetti is up and running again.
Comment from BethShelby
The game must be over since some of the participates are leaving and some eliminated unless we need to wair for the winning announcement. I guess there will be a funeral for poor Zed?
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The game must be over since some of the participates are leaving and some eliminated unless we need to wair for the winning announcement. I guess there will be a funeral for poor Zed?
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Let's hope. The Cup-o-sghetti might just think Zed's a loyal customer.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, I have to go back and read the others, I love these characters, they are fabulous characters. I'm sorry I've been slack. So, they have been in a croquet contest and have been knocked out. I must read the others. I love their banter, Bill, you do it so well. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Oh, I have to go back and read the others, I love these characters, they are fabulous characters. I'm sorry I've been slack. So, they have been in a croquet contest and have been knocked out. I must read the others. I love their banter, Bill, you do it so well. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
