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My Words

A Few Words from above.

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Comment from Carlos' girl
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Hello author yours is a Very strong poem with boldness and courage. I enjoyed it very much. The notes following were also very good. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
    I'm teaching today at my church in Manahawkin,
    New Jersey.
    This was for practice.
    Thanks Carlos' girl.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Carlos' girl on 23-Jan-2022
    So welcome. My name is judy btw
Comment from AdaJulie
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Dear Brother Ricky,
For many months I missed my place to go and pray. I'm a Latter-day Saint a temple loving sister, as you say.
Your words of the sacred ceremonies, lift and inspire hope of Eternal Bliss as the only way.
Thank you for your words each and every day.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
    To He President of my Church asked for a Five Minute talk on the Temple.
    Later this month we are car piling to the DC. Temple.
    Thanks for your review!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from dragonpoet
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Ricky,
Those are important words to see and understand. That God created us to love and respect Him and all others on this world.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy.
Joan

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    When I talked about this message in a dream my friend Joseph basically looked at it that I need to reevaluate my life and make changes.
    Thanks for your time and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by dragonpoet on 21-Jan-2022
    You're welcome, Ricky.
    Joan
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they support the theme and words of this poem.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and compliment
these words.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    "My Words"
    Yes, is a kickoff for much more heavy and serious things to come in the month of January.
    Watch for "The Shivers"
    A journey into my pit of Hell!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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LOve the explanatory note here. The message is clear and very upbeat and spiritually uplifting. A different positivity in this one as compared to some of your poems that struggle with grief before coming out on the other side in faith.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    When I wrote this and explained that it was a dream to my friend Joe who's very religious.
    He stated that it's a message for change.
    It's a time period to reevaluate and improve yourself.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from jaded831
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God created man in His image. He didn't specifically talk about which race, color, or creed, which means all humans in the entire world. We need to stand together as a united world to honor Our Father.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thanks for your time starting review jaded.
    And, your words are very true.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent poem indeed my friend! The imagery is perfect and the words flow perfectly together throughout the piece;-)

Typo: ("Copyright �© Fanstory)

Thank you so much for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    But thanks again my dear for your review on this one.
    Yes, and I can't do too much about the copyright A's.
    Yes, it's caused by Fanstory when you go back and edit your work.
    Ricky
reply by Melodie Michelle on 21-Jan-2022
    Actually it's caused from copying and pasting, I'm sure it would stay fixed if you fixed it. I just highlight the entire line and type the correction over it and that usually takes care of it!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Eunice Amero
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Simply lovely. You did a great job. So much said so well. It's full of love. I really love this poem. You couldn't do better. Don't ever stop praising His name. Respect Him and each one of us. That's what God wants. Good work. Good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    It's funny that this presented itself unconsciously as I was ending a dream.
    I was actually in a room with two men.
    The first man was taking a shower.
    Which I needed also to do.
    After I finished a woman had laid out a load of nice and beautiful clothes on the side of a bed.
    I don't know who she was but I chose what I wanted to wear.
    Right after that is when I saw the hanging banner.
    It's kind of funny the thoughts we have when we're dreaming.
    Thanks for reviewing.
    Doctor Ricky