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a glimpse of time

Haiku-esque 5-7-9 (a morning glory)

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Comment from MissMerri
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I do love morning glories. This short poem is well done and actually quite clever. I loved the thoughts expressed in these three lines. The flower has but a short time to live, but makes the most of it. I take a lesson from that and apply it to my own life. Thanks! MM

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    MM,

    We only go through this life one time so let?s make the most of it, including posts to FanStory (-;

    Pleased you liked my attempt.
Comment from Pangalactic
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I'm a sucker for contemplative poems. Especially the topic of time. Deep thinking beautiful little short lived flower this one.
Nice little poem :) good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
    Pleased this contest entry met with your approval.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Beautiful piece! This brings the feelings of morning and peace. Sitting with a fresh cup of coffee outside on a deck enjoying a wall of morning glories. Thank you for waking my senses. I will save the coffee for morning.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
    Hope that coffee tastes good too. Thanks for your review and stars.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
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I always find it intriguing to watch time lapse videos of plants resting to sunlight. It's beautiful and so is your poem. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you.

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thanks Heather!

    Those time-lapsed videos are a fascinating way to ?see? the flowers blossoming.
reply by Heather Burroughs on 29-Jan-2022
    That was supposed to say reacting*
    And yes, they are fascinating 💗
Comment from Gee
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Oh, I did not know morning glories only last a day.

This is a wonderful poem for the 5-7-9 competition.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Gee

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Gee,

    Thanks for your review and stars. Until I researched, I did not know that fact either. Now we are both educated (-;