Skies Weep Misty Rain
A Cascade poem for Potlatch Poetry26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
One thing I've always known...when I see you've written a Cascade Poem I am certain I'm in for a treat! So many of these become clunky with the repetitiveness. Yours always drift as softly as a feather on a summer breeze.
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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One thing I've always known...when I see you've written a Cascade Poem I am certain I'm in for a treat! So many of these become clunky with the repetitiveness. Yours always drift as softly as a feather on a summer breeze.
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
I love the reflective tone of your Cascade poem! It made me imagine that cold, drizzly day when creatures are hiding. But it also brought life the rain and the "falling dew from leaden clouds." Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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I love the reflective tone of your Cascade poem! It made me imagine that cold, drizzly day when creatures are hiding. But it also brought life the rain and the "falling dew from leaden clouds." Beautifully done!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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wow! Thank you so much for this wonderful review. As you know, this is my favorite kind of day.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely Cascade poem Yvonne about the drizzly rain, before the feeze. You create quite a visual in this poem as the little creatures seek shelter. Your cascading lines work well. A lovely poem. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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A lovely Cascade poem Yvonne about the drizzly rain, before the feeze. You create quite a visual in this poem as the little creatures seek shelter. Your cascading lines work well. A lovely poem. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you. That's my favorite kind of day.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this, Dawn. Much appreciated.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Yvonne,
I really enjoyed this poem. That and the picture reminds me of where I used to live in the rainforest. There is a certain beauty in the misty rain, and the quiet that it brings, tamping down the noise, it can really be quite peaceful. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Hello Yvonne,
I really enjoyed this poem. That and the picture reminds me of where I used to live in the rainforest. There is a certain beauty in the misty rain, and the quiet that it brings, tamping down the noise, it can really be quite peaceful. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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I see you understand why I like those days so much! Thank you.
Comment from Gee
Interesting, a cascade poem.
I've never heard it before.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Regardless, I enjoyed the poem and thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Interesting, a cascade poem.
I've never heard it before.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Regardless, I enjoyed the poem and thanks for sharing with us.
Gee
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well done, my friend! You have achieved all your goals while writing a Cascade poem, good for you! I love how you mention the little creatures hiding underneath the shrubs and trees, this is because I love nature so much and all the creatures great or small who are living in this great land of ours! Thank you for teaching me how to write a Cascade poem.
You have written this one with style and grace!
Have a wonderful and misty day!
Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Well done, my friend! You have achieved all your goals while writing a Cascade poem, good for you! I love how you mention the little creatures hiding underneath the shrubs and trees, this is because I love nature so much and all the creatures great or small who are living in this great land of ours! Thank you for teaching me how to write a Cascade poem.
You have written this one with style and grace!
Have a wonderful and misty day!
Jesse
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review. It's my favorite kind of day.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Skies Weep Misty Rain ' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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' Skies Weep Misty Rain ' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
You're welcome.
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful cascade, damommy. The picture was perfect, it was dull, dark and dismal. I really enjoyed your poem because it was dull, dark and dismal, which was great.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This was a wonderful cascade, damommy. The picture was perfect, it was dull, dark and dismal. I really enjoyed your poem because it was dull, dark and dismal, which was great.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Believe or not, this is my favorite kind of day.
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You are so very welcome, Yvonne. Oh I believe you, I chose a misty day over sunshine.
Comment from Bill Schott
This cascade poem, Skies Weep Misty Rain, has the right formatting and captures those days when the gray, wet, cold of a day sends critters for cover and drains people of humor.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This cascade poem, Skies Weep Misty Rain, has the right formatting and captures those days when the gray, wet, cold of a day sends critters for cover and drains people of humor.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I love days like that. Thanks, Bill.
