One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Very beautiful presentation background colour and font. I love your chosen colours. Amazing photo. Very well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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This is a very nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Very beautiful presentation background colour and font. I love your chosen colours. Amazing photo. Very well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
What a fabulous picture!
Your words, though, paint an equally impressive picture in my mind's eye.
The word 'puncture' is specific and dramatic. I love it!
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
What a fabulous picture!
Your words, though, paint an equally impressive picture in my mind's eye.
The word 'puncture' is specific and dramatic. I love it!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from NmaHassan Muhammad
The poem is apt to capture the nature of things and also, in juxtaposition with human nature. Although it is about a natural occurrence such an underwater eruption, it describes the somewhat deceitful nature that sometimes embodies the human body which could appear calm but with a troubled mind. I imagine within a calm body anger or disease suddenly erupting to disrupt the calmness. The note makes it only more poignant. Thank you for the nice offering.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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The poem is apt to capture the nature of things and also, in juxtaposition with human nature. Although it is about a natural occurrence such an underwater eruption, it describes the somewhat deceitful nature that sometimes embodies the human body which could appear calm but with a troubled mind. I imagine within a calm body anger or disease suddenly erupting to disrupt the calmness. The note makes it only more poignant. Thank you for the nice offering.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Good current events post Gypsy! Your color choices just add to the choice of your words.
Punctures the surface is a vivid expression! The reality is the tsunami roils those calm waters surrounding Tonga and other nearby Pacific islands.
Mark
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Good current events post Gypsy! Your color choices just add to the choice of your words.
Punctures the surface is a vivid expression! The reality is the tsunami roils those calm waters surrounding Tonga and other nearby Pacific islands.
Mark
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your feedback.
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Comment from Gee
Very nice Mrs. Gypsy
I'll be honest, I had to look up what cerulean meant. ;~)
It's a beautiful color. oh...gosh...I guess I could have read your notes also...lol. Very interesting and beautifully dangerous.
As always, Thanks for sharing
Gee
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Very nice Mrs. Gypsy
I'll be honest, I had to look up what cerulean meant. ;~)
It's a beautiful color. oh...gosh...I guess I could have read your notes also...lol. Very interesting and beautifully dangerous.
As always, Thanks for sharing
Gee
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your feedback, Gee.
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The words of this poem echoed around in the spaces of my mouth, and rolled off my tongue, mimicking the results of the cerulean eruption. Well done here.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The words of this poem echoed around in the spaces of my mouth, and rolled off my tongue, mimicking the results of the cerulean eruption. Well done here.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your feedback, Katherine.
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Comment from royowen
I was thinking exactly of this particular volcanic eruption as I was reading about this one, it would a lot closer to us than the west coast a the US, a nd closer still to NZ, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I was thinking exactly of this particular volcanic eruption as I was reading about this one, it would a lot closer to us than the west coast a the US, a nd closer still to NZ, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your exceptional review and feedback. :) Have a great day.
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Well done
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem. A beautiful picture and description of current events, tell of the tsunami warning. The poem describes the calm sub surface before the event and then the eruption exploding up to the surface very nicely. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I like this poem. A beautiful picture and description of current events, tell of the tsunami warning. The poem describes the calm sub surface before the event and then the eruption exploding up to the surface very nicely. Good job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
God bless you; my great poet; you may have done a good job visual effect of cerulean eruption; missed, sorry I could not read the whole, you posted odd colours, objective is incredible but it is illegible; self-pleasure, pride and profit is not an act of wise; readers' pleasure is more important; please check after posting; it was a loss of my precious time, energy and interest. Well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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God bless you; my great poet; you may have done a good job visual effect of cerulean eruption; missed, sorry I could not read the whole, you posted odd colours, objective is incredible but it is illegible; self-pleasure, pride and profit is not an act of wise; readers' pleasure is more important; please check after posting; it was a loss of my precious time, energy and interest. Well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for marking this shocking current news about Tonga with this poem! I wanted to write about it but wasn't quite sure what to say but you did great with this. You might even want to mention "Tonga" in your Description so people know.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you for marking this shocking current news about Tonga with this poem! I wanted to write about it but wasn't quite sure what to say but you did great with this. You might even want to mention "Tonga" in your Description so people know.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I have it in my notes but I will check it out. The tsunami was small, 2 feet or so. Thank you very much, Helen, I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.
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