Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

It's funny how we can harken back to some memory of childhood with such clarity. You have remembered, in detail, this childhood experience that really was a minor incident.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you so much for your review and generous rating. It's funny but I did not intend to post this poem just yet, I didn't think it was ready for release but I forgot to check the preview, mode box before closing up the editing page! I tried to find a way to withdraw the post but couldn't do it. I feel like I stepped in it all over again! LOL!
Thanks anyway for the review however, it encouraged me to follow through on my idea of writing a series of poems about my childhood memories that I still think about today. Thank you for being a part of this happy accident turned happenstance.

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Every little boy looks for the puddles. . .and that never changes. Even grown adult boys can be swayed when the temptation is present. A very cute story. Poor uncle, he had no idea he would be yelled at by your mom.
Thanks for sharing this heartwarming story. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you so much for your review and generous rating. It's funny but I did not intend to post this poem just yet, I didn't think it was ready for release but I forgot to check the preview, mode box before closing up the editing page! I tried to find a way to withdraw the post but couldn't do it. I feel like I stepped in it all over again! LOL!
Thanks anyway for the review however, it encouraged me to follow through on my idea of writing a series of poems about my childhood memories that I still think about today. Thank you for being a part of this happy accident turned happenstance.

reply by moongirlwriter on 20-Jan-2022

Good luck with writing the poems. I think it will be a fun challenge for you.:)