Truth or Dare
The Games We Play-20 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Oh, my stars. I had no idea where you were heading with this one! First one way, then another - that girl had me just as confused as this poor boy! I imagine that the sheriff-dad was really, really proud of his boy. Great story!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Carol,
Oh, my stars. I had no idea where you were heading with this one! First one way, then another - that girl had me just as confused as this poor boy! I imagine that the sheriff-dad was really, really proud of his boy. Great story!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Ah, so she was caught out this time. She was already a known predator. Yes, some women can bee like that and it taint the rest who are genuinely in trouble, as nobody will believe them. He had a lucky escape. A well written story, Carol. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Ah, so she was caught out this time. She was already a known predator. Yes, some women can bee like that and it taint the rest who are genuinely in trouble, as nobody will believe them. He had a lucky escape. A well written story, Carol. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
It happens all the time, and even more often lately. But I guess it's payback for all those years when girls were afraid to speak up when they should have. I like how you made the dire straights end up a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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It happens all the time, and even more often lately. But I guess it's payback for all those years when girls were afraid to speak up when they should have. I like how you made the dire straights end up a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Begin Again, a happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing that story with us. Not only was it well written but it kept you enthralled and had twists and turns, I guess it was a rollercoaster ride of a story, great job!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Hello Begin Again, a happy Friday to you. Thank you for sharing that story with us. Not only was it well written but it kept you enthralled and had twists and turns, I guess it was a rollercoaster ride of a story, great job!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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My favorite way to write... a rollercoaster. Probably because I never know myself where the story is headed until I finally arrive at our destination. LOL thank you for reading and enjoying. Have a great weekend.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Louise Muller
I really enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done! It is interesting from the first word to the last. I was excited to see where the story would go and you didn't disappoint.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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I really enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done! It is interesting from the first word to the last. I was excited to see where the story would go and you didn't disappoint.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
You held my interest the entire way through, wondering what this girl would do next. The ending was a surprise. Thank goodness there was a recording of what they said to prove the boy hadn't done anything wrong. Well done!!
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You held my interest the entire way through, wondering what this girl would do next. The ending was a surprise. Thank goodness there was a recording of what they said to prove the boy hadn't done anything wrong. Well done!!
Patty
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Whew!! No wonder his father warned him! It's good that all was recorded. You did a great job showing the mixed feelings of the narrator as well as the bizarre behavior of Eleanor to keep the reader in suspense. I like the twist at the end. Too many false rape charges have put innocent boys in jail. I know a kid who served a five year sentence because his girlfriend was 17 and he was 18. Her family was angry because he didn't marry her.
One question - I wasn't sure how to imagine this part:
She playfully wiggled them (her fingers? or her lips?)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Whew!! No wonder his father warned him! It's good that all was recorded. You did a great job showing the mixed feelings of the narrator as well as the bizarre behavior of Eleanor to keep the reader in suspense. I like the twist at the end. Too many false rape charges have put innocent boys in jail. I know a kid who served a five year sentence because his girlfriend was 17 and he was 18. Her family was angry because he didn't marry her.
One question - I wasn't sure how to imagine this part:
She playfully wiggled them (her fingers? or her lips?)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the review as always. I wish I could stay caught up but circumstances are burying me at the moment.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
You remind me a Jackie Collins, when you write like this!!!
And that is so dope! you have the amazing skill of holding your
readers attention. Not to mention, you did an amazing on this also.
Stay Connected
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You remind me a Jackie Collins, when you write like this!!!
And that is so dope! you have the amazing skill of holding your
readers attention. Not to mention, you did an amazing on this also.
Stay Connected
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Wow! What a flattering comment! My head might explode but my smile and heart will thank you so so much. I appreciate all your comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent writing. Good story.
(But where was the recording device?)
I've never heard them called window wipers before, but it works. I know what you were referring to. (windshield)
Good luck.
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Excellent writing. Good story.
(But where was the recording device?)
I've never heard them called window wipers before, but it works. I know what you were referring to. (windshield)
Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Wow - such an unexpected ending! You have crafted an excellent story, and, like him, we cannot see her game until the end. So glad it worked out for him - it could so easily have seen him as a victim of her evil conniving.
Well written, Carol!
Wendy
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Wow - such an unexpected ending! You have crafted an excellent story, and, like him, we cannot see her game until the end. So glad it worked out for him - it could so easily have seen him as a victim of her evil conniving.
Well written, Carol!
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
