Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! It even made me smile. Great photo! I like the comment
above the title of this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022

Thank you so much

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and effective imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks Gypsy

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this entertaining, amusing piece about a pelican that is REALLY full of himself.
Perfect artwork

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks Janice

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Wonderful photo! And I like the words with the clever rhyme - that's very witty. To get all three lines rhyming shows special thoughtfulness. Best wishes for your entry!
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks Wendy

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. For such a few words, this is a pretty cool image of a pelican. The picture is great, but your work gives him the attitude that makes the poem. Good job.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you

Comment from Gee

Excellent

Cute, limerickishy 5-7-5 poem for the competition.
I enjoy the humor poems
I hope you do well in the competition.

Thanks for sharing with us.
Good Luck

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thanks again Gee. I am so glad you like my funny poems

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Good little humorous poem. good luck in the contest. I don't know what's more crazy a pelican who thinks he can walk like a man or the man who keeps it as a bet, either way, nice poem and good luck again!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you so much

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

You made me laugh early, before my morning coffee, setting my day off to a good start. Thank you for that. The picture is priceless. Together they make a perfect match. You should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you so much for your very well appreciated comments.

Comment from Ashley Shipley

Excellent

So simple yet effective! The image really works with the poem and gives it a new dimension. I like the rhyme and the humourous concept.

Well done and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Tha m you so much.

Comment from Thatguypk

Exceptional

If this is a competition entry, it deserves to win. Part of the art of writing is picking the perfect subject, and with this little gem, you have picked perfectly. Blissfully simple and yet so humorous in only 3 lines. Very well done.
PK

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022

Thank you so much for the great revue and the super shiny stars. Much appreciated