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Drifting

Sometimes our tears blur our vision. Dry them.

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Comment from pome lover
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I think that could certainly apply to some during these bad times as there's much to lament.
I like the fragile paper boat analogy.
Well chosen words and thought provoking message.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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    Thank you for your time and kind response to my poem.
Comment from Gee
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Very nice 5-7-5 entry for the contest.
The paper boat image is great!
And a great message in the poem too.

Thanks for sharing
We appreciate it.
Good Luck

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

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    Thank you for your time and kind response to my poem.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello random faceless poet thank you for sharing your 5-7-5 entry, I wish you all the luck. For such a short poem not only does it say a lot, but if you think about it, it's a little sad and depressing, (life's realities vs our dreams). good luck again!

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thank you for your time and kind response to my poem. Life sucks at times.