Snowy
Poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thanks again for a great review & 6 stars zanya
Comment from Pantygynt
The words express your intention beautifully but unfortunately this is not a 5-7-5. The second line has eight syllables as shown in the syllabic breakdown below.:
push-ing - through - lay-ers - of - hard-packed
It shouldn't be too hard to remedy this.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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The words express your intention beautifully but unfortunately this is not a 5-7-5. The second line has eight syllables as shown in the syllabic breakdown below.:
push-ing - through - lay-ers - of - hard-packed
It shouldn't be too hard to remedy this.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Yes thanks for reviewing & syllable discrepancy reminder -much appreciated. zanya
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm not usually a fan of 5-7-5 poems but I liked this one. The hope for spring projected by both your words and the picture you chose to accompany your poem are inspiring. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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I'm not usually a fan of 5-7-5 poems but I liked this one. The hope for spring projected by both your words and the picture you chose to accompany your poem are inspiring. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Great - glad you liked it & awarded it an extra, precious star ! zanya
