Long Way Home
A loop poem for the contest11 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This is a well written and illustrated poem about the life a sea turtle. She returns to the beach where she was born to have her children and hope they all make it to the water before they die.
There is a Hallmark move about this about a couple who fall in love because they are both trying to keep the sea turtle safe.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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June,
This is a well written and illustrated poem about the life a sea turtle. She returns to the beach where she was born to have her children and hope they all make it to the water before they die.
There is a Hallmark move about this about a couple who fall in love because they are both trying to keep the sea turtle safe.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you! I think I may have seen that Hallmark movie about rescuing sea turtles. lol I just wish more people were aware of the fragile web of life that connects man to the animals. IF they go, we're next! I appreciate your dropping by to read.
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No problem, June. You are so right.
Joan
Comment from Mary Vigasin
June this is a wonderful and well-written poem about the amazing life cycle and journey of the sea turtle. I can only imagine how difficult it is to write a loop poem.
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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June this is a wonderful and well-written poem about the amazing life cycle and journey of the sea turtle. I can only imagine how difficult it is to write a loop poem.
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts. I?m glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well done with your Loop poem June. All your loop words work beautifully to tell the story of the turtles that go back to their birth beach to breed. That, I find is another amazing feat of nature. Lovely presentation, cheers.
Valda
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Well done with your Loop poem June. All your loop words work beautifully to tell the story of the turtles that go back to their birth beach to breed. That, I find is another amazing feat of nature. Lovely presentation, cheers.
Valda
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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I?m glad you enjoyed this one on the gentle and graceful sea turtle. I appreciate your insights, as always.
Comment from royowen
Animals are amazing, but more than that, the one who made them is most amazing, birds fly unerringly south for winter, salmon return to their birthplace to spawn a die, they are not reasoning creatures, that is something beyond rational explanation, beautifully written June, great rhyming, articulate and skilful, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Animals are amazing, but more than that, the one who made them is most amazing, birds fly unerringly south for winter, salmon return to their birthplace to spawn a die, they are not reasoning creatures, that is something beyond rational explanation, beautifully written June, great rhyming, articulate and skilful, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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All creatures, great and small, are a testament to the amazing God of heaven and earth. It's a shame when man not only does not appreciate His handiwork, but end up hurting them with their greed and selfish endeavors. Thank you for sharing your insights.
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Well done
Comment from juliaSjames
Excellent form for your informative and inspiring loop poem, June..I love that you write most of it from the POV of the turtle..My goddaughter swam with a sea turtle in the Grenadines. Only for a short while. But the video was magical. Effortless grace of the turtle at home in the sea.
Beautiful illustration
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Excellent form for your informative and inspiring loop poem, June..I love that you write most of it from the POV of the turtle..My goddaughter swam with a sea turtle in the Grenadines. Only for a short while. But the video was magical. Effortless grace of the turtle at home in the sea.
Beautiful illustration
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I'm glad yor goddaughter was able to swim with these gentle and beautiful creatures. I've swam with dolphins, but not turtles. Nature is inspiring. Thank you for taking the time to share your sentiments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine loop poem June and these sea creatures battle in their own world foe survival and we have no knowledge of their plight unless we read poetry like this, magical, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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A fine loop poem June and these sea creatures battle in their own world foe survival and we have no knowledge of their plight unless we read poetry like this, magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Sea turtles are such sweet and gentle creatures. I do worry about destruction of the coastlines that would affect their homing instincts. They need to be treasured and protected. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely done loop poem. The information is amazing. There are many thing in nature that will blow you mind and this is one of them. I don't understand how that is even possible but there is much I don't understand.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Nicely done loop poem. The information is amazing. There are many thing in nature that will blow you mind and this is one of them. I don't understand how that is even possible but there is much I don't understand.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Sea turtles are such sweet and gentle creatures. I do worry about destruction of the coastlines that would affect their homing instincts. They need to be treasured and protected. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a great loop entry. The verses connected by the loop of words are well rhymed with the content being educational as well as thoughtful. I especially enjoyed the final verse which acts as a reminder of how easy it is to overlook and neglect the underworld species. Your author's notes are appreciated and very interesting. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is a great loop entry. The verses connected by the loop of words are well rhymed with the content being educational as well as thoughtful. I especially enjoyed the final verse which acts as a reminder of how easy it is to overlook and neglect the underworld species. Your author's notes are appreciated and very interesting. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Sea turtles are such sweet and gentle creatures. I do worry about destruction of the coastlines that would affect their homing instincts. They need to be treasured and protected. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your loop contest poem reads well, June. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes according to the rules and great descriptions. The art choice is a great pairing with your well thought out words. It is sad the beaches change for the turtles by man's hand. Even the artificial lights on condos etc. near the beach upsets them.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Your loop contest poem reads well, June. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes according to the rules and great descriptions. The art choice is a great pairing with your well thought out words. It is sad the beaches change for the turtles by man's hand. Even the artificial lights on condos etc. near the beach upsets them.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Sea turtles are such sweet and gentle creatures. I do worry about destruction of the coastlines that would affect their homing instincts. They need to be treasured and protected. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from pome lover
at first, I thought there was some kind of fish that did this, because of the picture, but it's a good Loop poem about the sea turtle.
Well done. Pretty poem and good info in your remarks.
When you say, magnetic field, I assume you mean figuratively - it draws them. They're fun to watch in videos. I've never seen them, live.
good entry.
Katharine
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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at first, I thought there was some kind of fish that did this, because of the picture, but it's a good Loop poem about the sea turtle.
Well done. Pretty poem and good info in your remarks.
When you say, magnetic field, I assume you mean figuratively - it draws them. They're fun to watch in videos. I've never seen them, live.
good entry.
Katharine
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Sea turtles are such sweet and gentle creatures. I do worry about destruction of the coastlines that would affect their homing instincts. They need to be treasured and protected. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
