Traveling Home
Traveling to where I've always been18 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
I had to go back a bit Theodore, to find a piece of your writing I haven't read. Please forgive me for popping in so randomly, but I needed a Theodore fix, lol. The coming of us before the Lord. I'm not an overly religious person, but when I read your words, they always send me messages all of which prompt me to ask myself, why am I not? Anyway, a beautiful piece of writing. I may not be word-drugged as of yet. So, you may hear from me again before this night is out, lol. Lucky you!
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I had to go back a bit Theodore, to find a piece of your writing I haven't read. Please forgive me for popping in so randomly, but I needed a Theodore fix, lol. The coming of us before the Lord. I'm not an overly religious person, but when I read your words, they always send me messages all of which prompt me to ask myself, why am I not? Anyway, a beautiful piece of writing. I may not be word-drugged as of yet. So, you may hear from me again before this night is out, lol. Lucky you!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from karenina
Can't believe, can't imagine I missed this when it was posted. A blessed write of torment and triumph. A prayer as much as a poem...
Testament to faith sorely tested but never broken. Your penultimate stanza is a miracle unto itself...
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Can't believe, can't imagine I missed this when it was posted. A blessed write of torment and triumph. A prayer as much as a poem...
Testament to faith sorely tested but never broken. Your penultimate stanza is a miracle unto itself...
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thanks, K. Blessed torment and triumph.
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A gift to read!
Comment from Gee
Thank you, Mr. Theodore.
Another great poem.
I'm still not at the free verse/blank verse level.
But I do enjoy your poems.
And this had a great ending.
Thank you sir
Gee
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Mr. Theodore.
Another great poem.
I'm still not at the free verse/blank verse level.
But I do enjoy your poems.
And this had a great ending.
Thank you sir
Gee
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the great review, Gee.
Comment from Ricky1024
We all have already arrived as long as we accept Jesus Christ as our Lord and savior.
As long as we practice that each and every Sabbath Sunday and fulfill our commitments.
As long as we take in the sacrament realizing the sacrifice he has done for us all!
Well written and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Note: Doctor Ricky is a Latter-Day Saint Priest with the Church of Jesus Christ)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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We all have already arrived as long as we accept Jesus Christ as our Lord and savior.
As long as we practice that each and every Sabbath Sunday and fulfill our commitments.
As long as we take in the sacrament realizing the sacrifice he has done for us all!
Well written and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Note: Doctor Ricky is a Latter-Day Saint Priest with the Church of Jesus Christ)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks Doctor Ricky. I didn't know you were a priest!
Comment from Wendy G
Tim, this is so beautiful! Love the last line of this prayer-like poem. "You assure me that I have already arrived." What a great assurance and promise. Despite the wilderness we are journeying through, we have His presence, a safe haven. I will bookmark for me to read again and again.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Tim, this is so beautiful! Love the last line of this prayer-like poem. "You assure me that I have already arrived." What a great assurance and promise. Despite the wilderness we are journeying through, we have His presence, a safe haven. I will bookmark for me to read again and again.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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As I just said, you have such a kind and tender heart. I love it. Thanks for the meaningful review.
Comment from Sally Law
I love your spiritual poem, Teddy dear. Our faith is worth the fight as the Lord has given us His all: His body and blood. His love, strength, and assurances have carried you through so much, I see.
Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I love your spiritual poem, Teddy dear. Our faith is worth the fight as the Lord has given us His all: His body and blood. His love, strength, and assurances have carried you through so much, I see.
Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Sal, for the kind review.
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You are most welcome. Blessings, Sal :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!! Yes, God is with us through every journey we must travel. Sometimes I feel we must take those horrible routes to better understand God when we get there. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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AMEN!! Yes, God is with us through every journey we must travel. Sometimes I feel we must take those horrible routes to better understand God when we get there. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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thanks for the AMEN, Barb.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Yes. It always sounds good, when one chooses to openly declare
and bring his lord to the forefront of Art. And you have an amazing
way of putting that on display. Keep Writing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Yes. It always sounds good, when one chooses to openly declare
and bring his lord to the forefront of Art. And you have an amazing
way of putting that on display. Keep Writing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the review!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I see this as a prayer as much as a poem. It is an intimate discussion with God and thanking Him for sustaining him through difficult times.
Here you end by directing your prayer to God.
"You quiet my doubts and fears
within the safe haven of Your presence.
No matter how far and wide I must journey,
how many wildernesses I must endure,
You assure me I have already arrived."
A beautiful poem and prayer.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I see this as a prayer as much as a poem. It is an intimate discussion with God and thanking Him for sustaining him through difficult times.
Here you end by directing your prayer to God.
"You quiet my doubts and fears
within the safe haven of Your presence.
No matter how far and wide I must journey,
how many wildernesses I must endure,
You assure me I have already arrived."
A beautiful poem and prayer.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Mary, for the great review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Trust and faith in what we cannot see or physically feel is almost impossible for many, but without both, we can never reach the level of consciousness we seek to achieve. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Trust and faith in what we cannot see or physically feel is almost impossible for many, but without both, we can never reach the level of consciousness we seek to achieve. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the insightful review, Ric.