Scented
Captivating.2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good imagery and use of alliteration.
Nice description of the lure and attraction between the bee and the rose.
Good choice of picture too.
Best wishes
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good imagery and use of alliteration.
Nice description of the lure and attraction between the bee and the rose.
Good choice of picture too.
Best wishes
Robert
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the contest. I loved the image of the bee dancing to the open rose. It's a very vivid image and makes the poem as far as I'm concerned. well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Good poem for the contest. I loved the image of the bee dancing to the open rose. It's a very vivid image and makes the poem as far as I'm concerned. well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
