"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Howling at the Full Moon Again?"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from Carlos' girl
"War..woah. What is it good for? Absolutely nothing say it again". Yes. I like your writing it has good flow and no grammatical errors. Just wondering about your abundant use of the word yes
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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"War..woah. What is it good for? Absolutely nothing say it again". Yes. I like your writing it has good flow and no grammatical errors. Just wondering about your abundant use of the word yes
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The abundant use of the word "yes?"
Yes, sometimes is my laziness.
When it comes to editing my works.
Which are talked into my cell phone.
Sometimes it's easier just to add that word then drag the first word of the sentence over and capitalize it.
Thanks,
Ricky
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I use the word yeah alot. Funnym
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Be Blessed.
Ricky
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
The artwork is wonderful which is why I gave you one star. I have no idea what you are writing about. It says this is part of a book. If so you should always recap the previous chapter so the reader knows right where they left off. If it is supposed to be a poem what do the wolves howling at the moon have to do with World War I, or the Confederate War? Why are there so many question marks? Are you asking your reader questions? If I flipped open a book and this is what I saw I would put it back down and leave it. I do not understand what you are writing about.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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The artwork is wonderful which is why I gave you one star. I have no idea what you are writing about. It says this is part of a book. If so you should always recap the previous chapter so the reader knows right where they left off. If it is supposed to be a poem what do the wolves howling at the moon have to do with World War I, or the Confederate War? Why are there so many question marks? Are you asking your reader questions? If I flipped open a book and this is what I saw I would put it back down and leave it. I do not understand what you are writing about.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Well thank you so very much for stopping by and taking the time to put in a review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Gee
Mr. Ricky,
This is a completely different kind of poetry than I've seen on the site.
I am unsure where it is heading, since you pu the last line mentioning WWII
Thursday.
None the less, I appreciate you posting it and giving us the opportunity to read your work.
Thank you
Gee
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Mr. Ricky,
This is a completely different kind of poetry than I've seen on the site.
I am unsure where it is heading, since you pu the last line mentioning WWII
Thursday.
None the less, I appreciate you posting it and giving us the opportunity to read your work.
Thank you
Gee
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Well basically it starts out with the howling of the Moon and respecting God.
And then it goes to how humans disrespect him by what we do to each other.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Earl Corp
I like the history, but you have the date wrong for the Emancipation Proclamation. It was actually 1863 not 1861. I can't wait to read the next installments.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I like the history, but you have the date wrong for the Emancipation Proclamation. It was actually 1863 not 1861. I can't wait to read the next installments.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks I corrected that error when it comes to the Emancipation Proclamation.
Ricky
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem again. Howling at the moon. A great metaphor for the poem that carries throughout the poem. I like the way you tie it to the Civil War and the lives lost.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Great poem again. Howling at the moon. A great metaphor for the poem that carries throughout the poem. I like the way you tie it to the Civil War and the lives lost.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks again for reading my work.
Doctor Ricky 1024