The End Game
Warning: A game played to the death6 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a well written poem with a great flow and rhyme scheme. It has a nice overall presentation. Nice photo choice to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This is a well written poem with a great flow and rhyme scheme. It has a nice overall presentation. Nice photo choice to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for taking time to read and review this writing. I appreciate everyone here on the site and look forward to my time here. I have no doubts based on my readings of others and the reviews received for my writings, it will be an open avenue for more experience and learning. Thank you again and enjoy your weekend!
Comment from jwsteele
Fabulous write, expression, and observation.
This has been building for twenty years. Much longer actually
The master plan Terminal Madness is fully exposed.
The game is now over and we're in the home stretch
All truth is condemned to death
Too late now.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Fabulous write, expression, and observation.
This has been building for twenty years. Much longer actually
The master plan Terminal Madness is fully exposed.
The game is now over and we're in the home stretch
All truth is condemned to death
Too late now.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your time to read and give input to this writing. It is refreshing to see that many are now coming into this realization of what is happening. Although a bunch of losers, doesn't mean the fight is easy. My way of a touchdown is exposure. Thanks again and have a great weekend!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a gathering of wolfs in sheep's clothing playing their game into an expected end.
The work highlights their blindfolded disposition to the truth as they are sluiced and manoeuvred lawlessly through the doldrums to a gory end.
The work earns its texture through the effective use of similes, metaphors, alliterations, and an array of entanglement anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a gathering of wolfs in sheep's clothing playing their game into an expected end.
The work highlights their blindfolded disposition to the truth as they are sluiced and manoeuvred lawlessly through the doldrums to a gory end.
The work earns its texture through the effective use of similes, metaphors, alliterations, and an array of entanglement anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and give your feedback too this writing. I appreciate the input, as I am learning the language of writing. I just love to write (lol). I believe what I love is to express my thoughts, feelings, opinion and alike from inside to pen to paper. Thanks again and have a great weekend!
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was an interesting write, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This was an interesting write, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Hi There!
Thanks for taking the time to read and giving me great feedback on this writing. Honestly, I just love to write but I am not knowledgeable when it comes to the language of what is proper or not proper (I guess that is how I put it). I do love to learn and especially to learn anything that enhances my thoughts, opinions, feelings and teachings through pen to paper. Thanks again and have a great weekend.
Comment from Terry Broxson
An old saying is "from your lips to God's ear" maybe the game is almost over, this may be the home stretch. Hubris has played the part in many of the mighty to fall. They become their own worst enemy. Good job.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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An old saying is "from your lips to God's ear" maybe the game is almost over, this may be the home stretch. Hubris has played the part in many of the mighty to fall. They become their own worst enemy. Good job.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the giving of your time to both read and review the writing. I appreciate it very much! Have a great rest of the week.
Comment from papa55mike
I think we're closer to the end than maybe people think. Just read the signs. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I think we're closer to the end than maybe people think. Just read the signs. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your time to read and review this writing. I appreciate it more than realized, as time is precious! Have a great rest of the week.
