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Comment from Jennifer L Newcomb
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Guess grandpa decided for you lol. Chances are he enjoyed for the both of you. Now that I have seen the imagery, I am going to go get some pie (I have no cake). Love it!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Yep. After I wrote it, I made some fudge! (the poem was just silliness.)
Comment from Gee
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Eat It!
It's fudge.... it's just grandpa...he sneezes on everything...lol
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
I hope you do well in the competition.

Thanks for sharing
Gee

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    you made me laugh, Gee!
    Everybody else said ugh! throw it away!
    actually, it was just a bit of silliness BUT I did make a batch of fudge yesterday!
    Thanks for your good wishes!
    Gi (as my granddaughter calls me)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Eeeewww, throw it away quick.
Your contest entry is in good form, PL.
I enjoyed reading it til the last line.
Good job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    it was just a bit of silliness, Jan.
    Thanks for the good wishes.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 18-Jan-2022
    😊
Comment from judiverse
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In these times, your best choice is to throw it out. Definitely throw it out! How sad it would be, though, to let that last piece of fudge go. Very clever idea. I get tired of all the sunsets and moonlight poems. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    Thanks, Judi. It was just a bit of silliness. Actually after I wrote it I made a batch of fudge. Got lots left. :)
reply by judiverse on 18-Jan-2022
    You're welcome. I hope no one was around to drool on it. judi
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    nope. Live alone. So, unless I give some away, it's all mine (maniacal laugh)
reply by judiverse on 18-Jan-2022
    Oh, good for you. (Send me a piece.) judi
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    :)
Comment from Debra White
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Hi Katharine:)
What's there to think about?! Don't eat it!!
I had to laugh at your 5-7-5 (which is in perfect form!)
It reminded me of dinner time, last Sunday, when my mother-in-law sneezed on my daughter's dinner... Katie was horrified (she was really enjoying her roast pork dinner until that moment) my mother-in-law was somehow oblivious. Needless to say, Katie didn't eat a bite more.
Good luck in the contest,
Best wishes, as always, Debra x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    how funny!. Actually mine was just a bit of made up silliness - however, it made me want some fudge and I made a batch yesterday!
Comment from robyn corum
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Katharine,

That would be an awesome way to diet. Just let someone go through and LICK everything in the house. YUM yum!!! Or...not. That would turn a lot of folks off, wouldn't it?

Blech! Thanks!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    after writing that silliness, I did actually make a batch of fudge! got a long way to go before the last piece. heh
Comment from irishauthorme
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Wow, what a difficult decision! Could this be a cusp?
Recovering from the Christmas Fudge Attack, two kinds, white and dark, and the associated weight gain;
Fudge today,
Keto tomorrow.
Oh, and still have two forbidden corn dogs in the freezer.
Any advice?
irish

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    I am the wrong one to ask :)
    Just made a fresh batch of fudge yesterday. sigh
    Katharine
reply by irishauthorme on 24-Jan-2022
    Yes, I do relate! Had a Verboten Chicken Fried Steak yesterday, my lying scale is rebuking me...
    irish
Comment from Shirley McLain
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That sneeze answered your question. You did a good job with your contest entry. I didn't see any errors in your three lines. Good luck in the contest. Shirley

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    thank you
Comment from Begin Again
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Ugh! Decision made! I was just about to break the rules and pop it into my mouth, but luckily Grandpa's sneeze saved me in many more ways than I care to consider. LOL

Carol

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    I solved the problem. made a fresh batch yesterday :)
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Katherine,
Thanks for the laugh. What a dilemma. Especially if the author was a child. One wonders if germs evaporate if they are left out in the air long enough. Maybe if the fudge was hidden in a room out of site for a few hours it would be safe. Why does life have to be so hard sometimes?
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    I wrote that after making a batch of fudge. Am a long way from the last piece. :) Thanks for reading.