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Quiet Lawyer

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Can a broken heart be mended?

25 total reviews 
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
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I am really enjoying your new story. SO glad I found this before it progressed too far forward. Just one little spag. "I heard I couldn't ride without [a] one."

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
    Made the correction. Thanks
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
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I should tell you...If I was Cordero, and Alexandria looked like the woman
in that picture you posted, I would definitely give my heart to her. And she
could most likely have all of my money with it. LOL!!! Nevertheless, this is a good
write. Although I love more action. Keep Writing. And definitely, Stay Connected

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    It's a romance, I can promise action, but the action isn't the main part of the story. Not the next post, but the following one, there will be gun drawn, does that help? LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Loved the way the dialogue flowed in this one. Difficult to do .Gets the reader involved and wanting to find out more . All the best for the completion of the book.
Regards
Barry Penfold

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
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The story has progressed through interesting dialogues. The theme is very exciting. Cow boy and a city lawyer, diametrically opposites ,apparently . But there could be underlying similarities..

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Mmm, another love story, boys meets girl; girl is a corporate figure and boy a cowboy, but this how love starts. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janetsue
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The story is advancing nicely. Appaloosas have always been one of my favorite breeds. In the 1950s TV show, Wild Bill Hickock rode an appaloosa named Buckshot. I loved it. And I enjoyed reading your chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent chapter my friend! The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together throughout;-)

Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 16-Jan-2022
    ;-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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You've got a really good start to this story, Barb, and I just know it's going to be a wonderful romantic story. But, (there is always a 'but') I don't think Ali has heard the last of that Alan creature. I'm hoping she doesn't go back home for a long while! I'd give this a six, but I'm saving it for my other favourite story of yours!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    You're right about Alan. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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City girl gets introduced to farm life, and a few other things along the way. But my guess is: she'll never be the same after a few days at the ranch. Of course, I'm an old hard boot who grew up breeding, breaking, and racing horses from the farm to the track. So, I'm prejudice. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    It's good to know. I am familiar with horses but not an expert. You can keep me honest in my story. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Ric Myworld on 16-Jan-2022
    I could tell you weren't a total greenhorn right off. LOL. Hope you got a good report from the doctor.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    I basically did, but he did say it would take another 12 months for my wrist to totally heal. I wanted to slap him, I did not. LOL
reply by Ric Myworld on 16-Jan-2022
    Slapping him might have taken you back to square one. LOL. Yes, it takes those bones in highly used areas a long time to fully heal. Be patient. Easy for me to say, it's not my wrist. :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    I can now do most things, but it reminds me when I've attempted something I'm not ready for.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing the second chapter of this story. It is moving along well. I always enjoy stories about horses, and will look forward to Ali's first riding lesson.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Anne Johnston on 16-Jan-2022
    You are welcome