Joey Hobblefester Can't Read
Sometimes years pass hiding shameful secrets.7 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Apart from not liking the guy's name, I liked everything else about this story... the father-son relationship is warm; the dad found a great strategy to keep his son engaged in the process, and he learnt a lot himself. The cute confession at the end is a great link back to Billy's love interest. I'm pleased that trying to impress a girl has had such positive results for both father and son's reading ability, an essential skill for work advancement and for pleasure.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Apart from not liking the guy's name, I liked everything else about this story... the father-son relationship is warm; the dad found a great strategy to keep his son engaged in the process, and he learnt a lot himself. The cute confession at the end is a great link back to Billy's love interest. I'm pleased that trying to impress a girl has had such positive results for both father and son's reading ability, an essential skill for work advancement and for pleasure.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating.
Comment from Jean Ann Huinker
As a teacher I would say that was an interesting twist on the father's part. In fact, he was a very smart man and I hope he learned to read, too.
This story is engaging and well written.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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As a teacher I would say that was an interesting twist on the father's part. In fact, he was a very smart man and I hope he learned to read, too.
This story is engaging and well written.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I think I have already replied to this but it keeps coming up so I must be doing something wrong. If you have already received my thanks several times just remember... I am THAT thankful.
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent contest entry, good luck. This is very creatively done. You have used the son to help the father who in turn has helped the son. A very nice turn of events. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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An excellent contest entry, good luck. This is very creatively done. You have used the son to help the father who in turn has helped the son. A very nice turn of events. Good job.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous rating.
Comment from cupa tea
That's a cute little story. You presented it well and It appears well thought out. I see no errors to point out for correction. Good Luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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That's a cute little story. You presented it well and It appears well thought out. I see no errors to point out for correction. Good Luck in the contest...
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating.
Comment from zanya
What a charming story about father and son interaction - it's a delight - life isn't always about knowing all the answers all of the time - a great fit for the contest title 'Pride '
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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What a charming story about father and son interaction - it's a delight - life isn't always about knowing all the answers all of the time - a great fit for the contest title 'Pride '
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. Your response is greatly appreciated. I look forward to your input on future entries.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. I was expecting some kind of a funny tale or a farce judging from the name choice. Personally I'd change the last name, I feel it sort of lets the story down a little.
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. I was expecting some kind of a funny tale or a farce judging from the name choice. Personally I'd change the last name, I feel it sort of lets the story down a little.
GMG
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. Your input encourages me more than you know. Thank you.
Comment from pome lover
What a delightful story. Dad might not have known how to read, but he used his head, kept his son from being embarrassed by him, and the boy's comment at the end, was wonderful. Great ending. Well written and a perfect "pride" entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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What a delightful story. Dad might not have known how to read, but he used his head, kept his son from being embarrassed by him, and the boy's comment at the end, was wonderful. Great ending. Well written and a perfect "pride" entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and generous rating. Your input encourages me more than you know. Thank you.
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You are most welcome!
