Till We Meet Again
A single night of unbridled passion9 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This fit the contest well. But this doesn't seem to be in a stage where he wants commitment but wants her available when ever he wants. Hopefully the relationship will grow to one of true commitment.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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This fit the contest well. But this doesn't seem to be in a stage where he wants commitment but wants her available when ever he wants. Hopefully the relationship will grow to one of true commitment.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
Thank you for this lovely review of my work. I?ve been away with family issues for awhile. Again, thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Always
Justafan of yours
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No problem. It is what we are here to do.
Joan
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
This is a great soft erotica poem. You commented that it was hard to keep it soft and I can see how you could/would want to expand on this poem. I feel like |I am right there with this woman in your poem. Great job you have drawn your reader in.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This is a great soft erotica poem. You commented that it was hard to keep it soft and I can see how you could/would want to expand on this poem. I feel like |I am right there with this woman in your poem. Great job you have drawn your reader in.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this oh so lovely review :)
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Now put something up I can give a six star review to. xo
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Hugs
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hugs to you my dear friend. xo
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xo
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes now.
I love the idea of her describing the next morning about their last night romp and how making love to her lover left her emotionally.
You chose a lovely pic to illustrate your poem. .. I think I saw it on Pinterest ( wink)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes now.
I love the idea of her describing the next morning about their last night romp and how making love to her lover left her emotionally.
You chose a lovely pic to illustrate your poem. .. I think I saw it on Pinterest ( wink)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Aww, thank you very much:)
I never win these things but this was a fun write.
Always
Comment from DragonBlue1
This was delightful to read, and I really loved the end with the note. My favorite lines:
He knew her body like none other
with ease he'd brought her to the brink of ecstacy over and over
Please do write on!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This was delightful to read, and I really loved the end with the note. My favorite lines:
He knew her body like none other
with ease he'd brought her to the brink of ecstacy over and over
Please do write on!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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I know you can?t see me but I?m smiling. Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Write a soft Erotica Poem contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements. I like the presentation. Your poem was sensual and not crude. You enticed the reader to read more and used all the five senses.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the Write a soft Erotica Poem contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements. I like the presentation. Your poem was sensual and not crude. You enticed the reader to read more and used all the five senses.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you, GBR! A lovely review from such an accomplished poet is humbling.
Thank you x
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse erotica, Till We Meet Again, finds the narrator in the morning afterglow of a successful night of lovemaking. The descriptions convince the reader that good things happened here.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This free verse erotica, Till We Meet Again, finds the narrator in the morning afterglow of a successful night of lovemaking. The descriptions convince the reader that good things happened here.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Absolutely true!
Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Nicely done--very erotic in mood yet, as you said, keeping it soft and focused on the feeling rather than the action. It is a very mature description or a mature relationship/experience.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Nicely done--very erotic in mood yet, as you said, keeping it soft and focused on the feeling rather than the action. It is a very mature description or a mature relationship/experience.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely insightful review :)
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a raunchy, sensual write as love making is taken to the edge and she felt tired and exhausted from her night of passion here. I think you nailed the brief here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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This is a raunchy, sensual write as love making is taken to the edge and she felt tired and exhausted from her night of passion here. I think you nailed the brief here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly for the lovely review
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Descriptive. Inviting for the lustlorned. Random remembrances or fantasy?
I not only can read of the experience but taste and smell it as well. Enjoyable for me.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Descriptive. Inviting for the lustlorned. Random remembrances or fantasy?
I not only can read of the experience but taste and smell it as well. Enjoyable for me.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I?m delighted you found this to your liking :)
