Even Children Get Older
A Nonet Poem about my kids.5 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Wow, wow. Love this.
Wish I had more stars.
Brings a certain reality, yet, signifies a certain thought, all to do with time and age, and thoughts that are ever evident as we go on.
Watching them grow old is such a statement when one also defines such a category.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Wow, wow. Love this.
Wish I had more stars.
Brings a certain reality, yet, signifies a certain thought, all to do with time and age, and thoughts that are ever evident as we go on.
Watching them grow old is such a statement when one also defines such a category.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks, RG! Always fun to practice in other forms of poetry, right?
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, how bittersweet. I love the format you chose for the poem. It really added dearth.
As you go through and show the changes your children have over gone, you tie it all back in the end to their busy hands as children!
Love it,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Awww, how bittersweet. I love the format you chose for the poem. It really added dearth.
As you go through and show the changes your children have over gone, you tie it all back in the end to their busy hands as children!
Love it,
Rhonda
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Rhonda! I appreciate your time on my little Nonet!
Comment from Wendy G
I started to feel old when I noticed that police and doctors looked younger than my children! Well written Nonet about the realisation of passing years, viewed from a different perspective. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I started to feel old when I noticed that police and doctors looked younger than my children! Well written Nonet about the realisation of passing years, viewed from a different perspective. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Wendy! I appreciate your time and your review.
Comment from LovnPeace
I too, am in that boat. I rarely look in the mirror, but I can see my age in my children. It is so hard to believe, as they will always be children in my heart and eyes. Well done. I enjoyed this. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I too, am in that boat. I rarely look in the mirror, but I can see my age in my children. It is so hard to believe, as they will always be children in my heart and eyes. Well done. I enjoyed this. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I guess old age is the nature of humanity. In a family of twelve, my baby sister turns seventy this year. Life is short and we must take advantage of the time we have on this planet. found this to be a lovely poem. I wish you all the luck in the world in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I guess old age is the nature of humanity. In a family of twelve, my baby sister turns seventy this year. Life is short and we must take advantage of the time we have on this planet. found this to be a lovely poem. I wish you all the luck in the world in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Oh, bless you for this. I appreciate your time and review!
