For A Better Day
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Comment from amahra
You've written a great poem; as always the rhythm and rhyming was perfect. I learned a new word as well: Blest, I discovered is an archaic or literary term for blessed.
You've written a great poem; as always the rhythm and rhyming was perfect. I learned a new word as well: Blest, I discovered is an archaic or literary term for blessed.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, life is a mixed bag of joy and sorrow and everything in-between, but the good in mankind does outweigh the bad. This uplifting poem reminds the reader that we must look for the light.
Yes, life is a mixed bag of joy and sorrow and everything in-between, but the good in mankind does outweigh the bad. This uplifting poem reminds the reader that we must look for the light.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from June Sargent
The course of wisdom is to accept what we cannot change and look ahead a better day - a new dawn bright and clear. Inspiration will lead the way, as we climb that mountain with renewed strength.
The course of wisdom is to accept what we cannot change and look ahead a better day - a new dawn bright and clear. Inspiration will lead the way, as we climb that mountain with renewed strength.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Jaybird, once again, you've written a heartfelt poem and a poem
of truth. I especially liked:
If inspiration leads the way,
along with love, compassion, peace;
You'll find in this a better day,
(A beautiful thought and a beautiful way to live.)
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within.
A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Hello Jaybird, once again, you've written a heartfelt poem and a poem
of truth. I especially liked:
If inspiration leads the way,
along with love, compassion, peace;
You'll find in this a better day,
(A beautiful thought and a beautiful way to live.)
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within.
A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another beautiful poem giving great advice about living. I like the verse:
"If inspiration leads the way,
along with love, compassion, peace;
You'll find in this a better day,
past troubles will surely decrease."
Another beautiful poem giving great advice about living. I like the verse:
"If inspiration leads the way,
along with love, compassion, peace;
You'll find in this a better day,
past troubles will surely decrease."
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from GeraldShuler
Seventy five years of writing has brought you a long way. You have an easy pace to follow and a clear message. There are parts I would have worded differently for rhythm but that is not a negative. You write with a poet's freedom and it shows well... and reads well. Nobody could ever rewrite your words because then it wouldn't be YOUR heart.
Seventy five years of writing has brought you a long way. You have an easy pace to follow and a clear message. There are parts I would have worded differently for rhythm but that is not a negative. You write with a poet's freedom and it shows well... and reads well. Nobody could ever rewrite your words because then it wouldn't be YOUR heart.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very well said and again you give us your sound wisdom. If we look forward to the coming day positively our past problems diminish.
I always look forward to your wisdom.
Blessings
Mary
Very well said and again you give us your sound wisdom. If we look forward to the coming day positively our past problems diminish.
I always look forward to your wisdom.
Blessings
Mary
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very meaningful poem full of hope for the future. I found your words so inspirational and all written in perfect rhyme as usual. All the best. Jen.
This is a very meaningful poem full of hope for the future. I found your words so inspirational and all written in perfect rhyme as usual. All the best. Jen.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are positive, meaningful, have a message and are creative. I liked the author's second stanza "To climb the mountain we
must go". This was extremely meaningful to me. And when we do
climb it - it is stated in the last stanza. Thank you for a great poem!
The author's words are positive, meaningful, have a message and are creative. I liked the author's second stanza "To climb the mountain we
must go". This was extremely meaningful to me. And when we do
climb it - it is stated in the last stanza. Thank you for a great poem!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Well written - and yes, inspiration must lead the way, coming from a vision of what is possible. Love compassion and peace are necessary accompaniments if one wants to live a happy and rewarding life.
Wendy
Well written - and yes, inspiration must lead the way, coming from a vision of what is possible. Love compassion and peace are necessary accompaniments if one wants to live a happy and rewarding life.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022