For A Better Day
Keep looking for tomorrow48 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Tomorrow will dawn bright and clear is such a hopeful phase. Your wise advise to accept that and move on is sound and accurate. Tomorrow is coming but we must live today and enjoy the moment.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Tomorrow will dawn bright and clear is such a hopeful phase. Your wise advise to accept that and move on is sound and accurate. Tomorrow is coming but we must live today and enjoy the moment.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem has a great and true message. I enjoyed reading it. I like the smooth flow, the good rhymes, and the clear message. I agree. With true compassion, love, and integrity, one can meet his/her challenges.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem has a great and true message. I enjoyed reading it. I like the smooth flow, the good rhymes, and the clear message. I agree. With true compassion, love, and integrity, one can meet his/her challenges.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Cristine22
Lovely and very true. Tomorrow is a nice thought. It's coming, and we see hope as we climb our hills. This poem gives me a strong sense of hope in the future. Thanks for sharing and well done!
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Lovely and very true. Tomorrow is a nice thought. It's coming, and we see hope as we climb our hills. This poem gives me a strong sense of hope in the future. Thanks for sharing and well done!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from LovnPeace
Well said. I try now, to live in the moment though. I squandered so much precious time hovering over yesterday and tomorrow. You have made it work for you. Blessings, Barbara
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Well said. I try now, to live in the moment though. I squandered so much precious time hovering over yesterday and tomorrow. You have made it work for you. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from nancy_e_davis
past troubles surely [will ]decrease. (replace will for meter's sake).
Just one small adjustment needed there for meter, Bill. At times we are so close to our work and we read over any mistake that may be there. Well done. Nice message. Nancy:)
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past troubles surely [will ]decrease. (replace will for meter's sake).
Just one small adjustment needed there for meter, Bill. At times we are so close to our work and we read over any mistake that may be there. Well done. Nice message. Nancy:)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from rockinm76233
another good one Jaybird. I hope that you are staying well and happy.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Did you say you are 95? Or did I just dream that?
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another good one Jaybird. I hope that you are staying well and happy.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Did you say you are 95? Or did I just dream that?
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
You have done a great job with your favorite poetic form and with your favorite poetic device-rhyme. A very upbeat and encouraging post. Well done and keep up the good work.
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You have done a great job with your favorite poetic form and with your favorite poetic device-rhyme. A very upbeat and encouraging post. Well done and keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
With God's help we will be able to face and conquer our tomorrows. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Your poem always share your wisdom with us. I appreciate that.
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With God's help we will be able to face and conquer our tomorrows. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Your poem always share your wisdom with us. I appreciate that.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
