For A Better Day
Keep looking for tomorrow48 total reviews
Comment from roof35
I surely hope tomorrow will be a better day both brighter and healthier for the world. Your poem rhymes well, flows well, and is simply very well written.
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I surely hope tomorrow will be a better day both brighter and healthier for the world. Your poem rhymes well, flows well, and is simply very well written.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
Comment from victor 66
There are many words of wisdom in your poems. Whenever I see your fan story name, I always make a point of reading and learning. You're writing is much appreciated.
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There are many words of wisdom in your poems. Whenever I see your fan story name, I always make a point of reading and learning. You're writing is much appreciated.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
Comment from Possummagic
Well you are ranked at the twenty fifth spot for a reason! This was a nice easy read and you certainly did not stray from the requirements of a great poem. Stay safe and well.PM
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Well you are ranked at the twenty fifth spot for a reason! This was a nice easy read and you certainly did not stray from the requirements of a great poem. Stay safe and well.PM
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jake,
This is an excellent poem/sonnet with a great message
about how to get through life and make troubles decrease.
I think we could all use some peace and a good rest.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Jake,
This is an excellent poem/sonnet with a great message
about how to get through life and make troubles decrease.
I think we could all use some peace and a good rest.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from mermaids
Your words teach the reader how to move forward in life, with love, compassion and peace. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words and a poem that is positive and encouraging.
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Your words teach the reader how to move forward in life, with love, compassion and peace. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words and a poem that is positive and encouraging.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the notes and poem, jaybird.
-A well written poem about life and the mountains
we need to climb.
-A very good third verse about inspiration,
love, and peace.
-A very good closing couplet with a positive message.
-Have a good rest of your weekend and week ahead.
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-Thanks for sharing the notes and poem, jaybird.
-A well written poem about life and the mountains
we need to climb.
-A very good third verse about inspiration,
love, and peace.
-A very good closing couplet with a positive message.
-Have a good rest of your weekend and week ahead.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from phil nelson
It's not easy letting go of the things that frustrate us or make us sad. Anger and depression linger around us unless we make the conscious decision that you refer to in order to push them aside with love and inspiration. Very enjoyable poem as always
All the Best
Phil
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It's not easy letting go of the things that frustrate us or make us sad. Anger and depression linger around us unless we make the conscious decision that you refer to in order to push them aside with love and inspiration. Very enjoyable poem as always
All the Best
Phil
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You write such sentimental poems. Each one expresses what life is about or should be about. Trust and courage go hand-in-hand. Without trust, it is difficult to be courageous. Without courage, it is not easy to trust.
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You write such sentimental poems. Each one expresses what life is about or should be about. Trust and courage go hand-in-hand. Without trust, it is difficult to be courageous. Without courage, it is not easy to trust.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
A well crafted poem with a good rhyme scheme and solid meter. The topic is well presented and, of course, speaks truth. You thoughts are clear and organised within the form.
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A well crafted poem with a good rhyme scheme and solid meter. The topic is well presented and, of course, speaks truth. You thoughts are clear and organised within the form.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi, Jaybird, I see your name is Bill, would you mind me calling you by your name? For a man of your age, who has seen so many changes in the world, and been to war, seen peace, and war again, you are a remarkable man. I love your poetry because it's not only inspiring, but full of good advice, too. This one especially means a lot to me. We will always have mountains to climb, but reaching the top is what makes life worth while. Well done again, my friend. I really enjoyed this one. :)) Sandra xx
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Hi, Jaybird, I see your name is Bill, would you mind me calling you by your name? For a man of your age, who has seen so many changes in the world, and been to war, seen peace, and war again, you are a remarkable man. I love your poetry because it's not only inspiring, but full of good advice, too. This one especially means a lot to me. We will always have mountains to climb, but reaching the top is what makes life worth while. Well done again, my friend. I really enjoyed this one. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
