Scene at a Croquet Gam 7
a scene with Pons and Ned9 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hehehehe, This is hilarious as usual. I don't know the first thing about croquet, but that isn't really the point. Ned is something else, and we all know it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Hehehehe, This is hilarious as usual. I don't know the first thing about croquet, but that isn't really the point. Ned is something else, and we all know it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
Wow! This game is deadly. It has already claimed the life of ZED, PED has lost his tentative hold on sanity. NED is just being NED, which is plenty. Poor PONS is as confused as ever, and the game goes on. Wow!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Wow! This game is deadly. It has already claimed the life of ZED, PED has lost his tentative hold on sanity. NED is just being NED, which is plenty. Poor PONS is as confused as ever, and the game goes on. Wow!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Croquet! Right?
Comment from RGstar
Hi Bill. I saw the first one of these, but I had difficulty separating characters, even for the idea, I suspect, the names were so finely alike, which created disorientation in my mind before even started reading..Yet! Brilliant the dialogues, and humorous the delivery. Just the names I tried and tried to get around.
I understand the design though...perhaps just me.
Past that...excellent work. I wish I could have put it better.
My best.
Have a great week my friend.
RG
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Hi Bill. I saw the first one of these, but I had difficulty separating characters, even for the idea, I suspect, the names were so finely alike, which created disorientation in my mind before even started reading..Yet! Brilliant the dialogues, and humorous the delivery. Just the names I tried and tried to get around.
I understand the design though...perhaps just me.
Past that...excellent work. I wish I could have put it better.
My best.
Have a great week my friend.
RG
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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The script would be better seen than read.
Comment from BethShelby
What an exciting game! Led got's some competition with Ded quoting Bible verses but I guess Ded can't be seen by the others. Will the cousins have a funeral for poor departed Zed once he has be deposited in a proper location?
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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What an exciting game! Led got's some competition with Ded quoting Bible verses but I guess Ded can't be seen by the others. Will the cousins have a funeral for poor departed Zed once he has be deposited in a proper location?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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The porta potty is out then?
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
Oh. My. STARS.
This has to be THE most amaZing co-inki-dink EVER!!! (!!)
Would you believe me if I told you MY family calls ME the:
*nut-who-walks-in-place*
?????????
Huh??
Huh????
Huh????????
Okay. Not really. But if they ever heard it, they would, for sure.
So.
It is really, reeeeeaaaally important that they never read this, capice??
Groovy-
Still enjoying!!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Bill,
Oh. My. STARS.
This has to be THE most amaZing co-inki-dink EVER!!! (!!)
Would you believe me if I told you MY family calls ME the:
*nut-who-walks-in-place*
?????????
Huh??
Huh????
Huh????????
Okay. Not really. But if they ever heard it, they would, for sure.
So.
It is really, reeeeeaaaally important that they never read this, capice??
Groovy-
Still enjoying!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Robyn AKA (nwwip)
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Shhhhhh?..!!!!!
You are not very good at keeping secrets. Grr
Comment from Jay Squires
So ... if my imaging faculty is working right, Bill, all the balls are touching, with the lead ball near the final peg? Dang, I thought my words were about to produce an epiphany. But if you can wait one more post to conclude your play, I suppose I can wait for my Satori!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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So ... if my imaging faculty is working right, Bill, all the balls are touching, with the lead ball near the final peg? Dang, I thought my words were about to produce an epiphany. But if you can wait one more post to conclude your play, I suppose I can wait for my Satori!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Hope this game ends well.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm hoping that Zed will have some last say over D-red. It's interesting that Pons didn't seem to react to the "psychotic" response of "D-red."
Seems like G.E.D. and Hed need a reality check. Hope Pons and Ned win!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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I'm hoping that Zed will have some last say over D-red. It's interesting that Pons didn't seem to react to the "psychotic" response of "D-red."
Seems like G.E.D. and Hed need a reality check. Hope Pons and Ned win!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Pons forfeited. The winner will seem obvious afterward.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent script my friend! The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together;-)
Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Excellent script my friend! The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together;-)
Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Melodie
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;-)
Comment from Earl Corp
I know you you like too have fun with your character's names but it's kind of hard to read and follow even with a good character list. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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I know you you like too have fun with your character's names but it's kind of hard to read and follow even with a good character list. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Scripts are better acted out when you don?t have to jump around reading.
