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Stitches

A storm inside your head.

30 total reviews 
Comment from Paul McFarland
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I'm not sure what you are getting at, but I like the rhyme and meter that you are using. I just read your poem for the fourth or fifth time, and I'm beginning to like it more.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This concise, expressive piece conveys a message--I think a more than one meaning is implied--about soul-searching and memories. The elements of weather are effectively used as symbols.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from 1Dreamer
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Very well done! How our minds truly can mess us up and even when we recognize it, it doesn't stop but rather the clouds build and build until we can stand it no longer.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from GeraldShuler
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You are really talented at this type of poem. Writing short lines with internal rhyme is a difficult thing to achieve and retain a natural flow. You do it with great ease. This is a poem that even poetry "haters" could enjoy.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from Janet Foor
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Thought provoking analogy in this interesting poem. Vivid imagery and perfect artwork to compliment your well chosen words.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from Wendy G
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Startling image, and a very appropriate choice for accompanying your words. Thoughts and memories are so powerful, and seek to control our minds and lives. But we need to move to a place where the weather is clear and we will not be overpowered by the crushing storms, for our well-being. Beautifully written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from thoughtgame2
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Very interesting read. I liked it a lot,and the picture just made you have to read it good work thank you.Hopefully this will not be the ending to this tale of mind and clouds. I'm interested in reading more on this subject.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from lindafisher
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The rhyming in this poem flows really well. I love the way you have described sinking into despair as deteriorating weather. Well written my friend. x

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from Cristine22
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Beautiful. Really excellent. It flows well and is easy to read yet still sophisticated in language. The comparison of storms in weather and storms in the mind is very apt and well described. Great job!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Thank you for reading it and for your kind words and generous stars.
Comment from dragonpoet
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These words and artwork shows the effect of memories on the head. How the past can cloud the present and future.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Thank you for reading it and for your kind words.
reply by dragonpoet on 14-Jan-2022
    My pleasure.
    dp