Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I guess I should be 'relieved' you didn't choose to write about it taking a dump! I admire the poetic ability of your rhyming, and humorous delivery.
Imagine the mess in the bathroom if humans peed like this! Girls would sit down politely but guys would just spray it everywhere.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Your poem made me laugh, which was the point. Your poem set my day off on a light note, for that I thank you. I like these short fun poems, we need more fun these days. Your poem should do well.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

well, if you got to go, you got to go! I guess the show could be avoided if he would have turned around to see who was watching. Evidently someone with a camera.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022

Comment from VJWild

Excellent

This really made me laugh! Love the rhyme scheme, follows the "rules," and is very witty. I could read these poems all day long. Good luck in the contest, it's gonna be tough to choose the winner, this piece is great though!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks for your review. I came across this picture, thought it was hilarious.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Well, I must admit that this is something different. I thought it was really cute. Not much I can say about these short writings except it looks good to me. I wish you all the luck in the world in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Maria Millsaps

Good

It was a witty animal poem and you did an outstanding job keeping the format. I was confused about the description. It said three lines but the poem looks as if it has more than 3. All in all. Nice job.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks for your review. When written on computer the poem does have 3 lines but it shows up differently when viewed on a phone.

Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit

Excellent

I really like this, it made me laugh. The title is also very clever. I think each line has something new to offer, and there are quite few funny parts which is quite a feat given its shortness.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks for your review.

Comment from cat frenette

Excellent

Ha ha ha! This is hilarious! Who hasn't had a chance to admire some magnificent creature, just to witness this exact scene. I see that this is a contest entry. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022

Thanks for your review. They all have to go sometime.