The Walrus and the Starfish
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an absolutely delightful poem--a deeply meaningful one that will make people of all ages smile. In addition to being skillfully and creatively written, it conveys a message about what counts most in daily life--and how we can get so preoccupied with quesions about--say, gravity--that we fail to appreciate what we CAN comprehend!
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This is an absolutely delightful poem--a deeply meaningful one that will make people of all ages smile. In addition to being skillfully and creatively written, it conveys a message about what counts most in daily life--and how we can get so preoccupied with quesions about--say, gravity--that we fail to appreciate what we CAN comprehend!
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Wow! Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so happy you enjoy this little story.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written poem about the Walrus and the star fish. You used very cute dialogue and very cute imagery. I loved this my friend. love and blessings, Teri
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This is a very cute and very well written poem about the Walrus and the star fish. You used very cute dialogue and very cute imagery. I loved this my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri. Truly appreciated.
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you are so welcome dear friend. How are you doing? love you!
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I'm hanging in there. Thanks for asking. I hope this finds you well and happy.
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I have good days and tired days as we all probably do, but God is so good to me it's hard to complain~
Comment from jenintorre
Ah. I really enjoyed reading this nonsence poem. It reminded me of Edward Lear. Delightful artwork and presentation and very uplifting. Best wishes. Jen.
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Ah. I really enjoyed reading this nonsence poem. It reminded me of Edward Lear. Delightful artwork and presentation and very uplifting. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I loved the message behind this beautifully written, cute poem. A walrus and a starfish though very different can be friends. Just like humans, who are different, can be friends. Just accept each other.
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I loved the message behind this beautifully written, cute poem. A walrus and a starfish though very different can be friends. Just like humans, who are different, can be friends. Just accept each other.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Barbara. If only humans could always do that.
Comment from robyn corum
Yvonne,
Absolutely! Why bother your head with all that big stuff when you have all you need? Friendship is a great big deal in this world - a precious and dear friend is so valuable!
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Yvonne,
Absolutely! Why bother your head with all that big stuff when you have all you need? Friendship is a great big deal in this world - a precious and dear friend is so valuable!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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So true! Thanks, Robyn.
Comment from Pantygynt
'We pigs need wings,' the porker said,
'when strange events come by;
then folk look out and round about
to see the piggies fly.
Like if that guy called Pantygynt
should actually reach
the western shores of USA
and Malibu, that beach.
As every night must follow day
so nearer draws the time
for me to board that Virgin plane
and to the heavens climb.
Please, no more bans on flights aboard.
I'm fully vaccinated;
I'm going with the lat'ral flow
This pig has too long waited.
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'We pigs need wings,' the porker said,
'when strange events come by;
then folk look out and round about
to see the piggies fly.
Like if that guy called Pantygynt
should actually reach
the western shores of USA
and Malibu, that beach.
As every night must follow day
so nearer draws the time
for me to board that Virgin plane
and to the heavens climb.
Please, no more bans on flights aboard.
I'm fully vaccinated;
I'm going with the lat'ral flow
This pig has too long waited.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Hahahaha. Wonderful! Thanks, Jim.
Comment from Gee
Great little children's poem...and we adults can learn something from it too. I see this is for a book. Good luck with the book. I loved the picture too.
Thanks so much for sharing we appreciate it.
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Great little children's poem...and we adults can learn something from it too. I see this is for a book. Good luck with the book. I loved the picture too.
Thanks so much for sharing we appreciate it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you! That makes me happy.
Comment from Sally Law
This is just precious, and I love the handdrawn art. Two friends that are so different getting along. Imagine that? Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sal XOs...
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This is just precious, and I love the handdrawn art. Two friends that are so different getting along. Imagine that? Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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We could learn a lot of animals. Thanks, Sally.
Comment from BethShelby
This is such a cute poem. Is it part of a children's book? It should be. Are you the artist who drew the illustration? I'm wondering how many chapter your book has and if you are still writing it?
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This is such a cute poem. Is it part of a children's book? It should be. Are you the artist who drew the illustration? I'm wondering how many chapter your book has and if you are still writing it?
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Awww, thank you. It is the second part of a little poem I started. I can't think of any more chapters at the time, but maybe. Thank you so much for the encouragement.
Comment from tfawcus
This gets to the heart of things. So many of our questions are pointless. The main thing to focus on is interpersonal relationships, the you and I of life.
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This gets to the heart of things. So many of our questions are pointless. The main thing to focus on is interpersonal relationships, the you and I of life.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Tony. I appreciate that. You got what I was trying to say.
